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What hotel do you prefer the most

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There are vasts of accommodations fitting all kind of tourists. However, I prefer Panda Hotel the most, where I stayed in when travelling to Hong Kong 4 years ago. When entering that place, I was impressed by its patron oriented service. Once, I stepped into this venture, the staff in professional uniform welcomed me with friendly smile and great support. Other than staff's delicacy, I had a chance to give mouthwatering delicacies a try such as Dim sum, Peking duck. . . Moreover, I also spent time in a fitness center to do morning workout which works up my appetite and allows me to recharge my battery. When it comes to the reason why I had a great time there, without hesitation, what pleased me the most is its good services including modern facilities, swimming pool, health club and the proximity of the hotel to the shopping centers as well as the theme park Disney Land. Furthermore, I am a big fan of pandas so its decoration is completely made my heart melt. There are not only pandas painted on the exterior of the hotel but also all over inside the hotel. In my opinion, Panda Hotel is perfect for my trip if there are not language barriers. City-dwellers in Hong Kong mainly use Cantonese instead of English. Therefore, I am only able to strike up a conversation with them throughout my parents or Google Translate.
There are vasts of accommodations fitting all kind of tourists.
However
, I prefer Panda
Hotel
the most, where I stayed in when travelling to Hong Kong 4 years ago.

When entering that place, I
was impressed
by its patron oriented service. Once, I stepped into this venture, the staff in professional uniform welcomed me with friendly smile and great support. Other than staff's delicacy, I had a chance to give mouthwatering delicacies a try such as Dim sum, Peking duck.
.
.
Moreover
, I
also
spent time in a fitness center to do morning workout which works up my appetite and
allows
me to recharge my battery.

When it
comes
to the reason why I had a great time there, without hesitation, what
pleased
me the most is its
good
services including modern facilities, swimming pool, health club and the proximity of the
hotel
to the shopping centers
as well
as the theme park Disney Land.
Furthermore
, I am a
big
fan of pandas
so
its decoration is completely made my heart melt. There are not
only
pandas painted on the exterior of the
hotel
but
also
all over inside the hotel.

In my opinion, Panda
Hotel
is perfect for my trip if there are not language barriers. City-dwellers in Hong Kong
mainly
use
Cantonese
instead
of English.
Therefore
, I am
only
able to strike up a conversation with them throughout my parents or Google Translate.
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IELTS essay What hotel do you prefer the most

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