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Writing task 2( essay) It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement？ Keywords: car Type: Agree & Disagree Tested on: 2021-09-04

Writing task 2( essay) It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. with the statement？ Keywords: car Type: Agree & Disagree Tested on: 2021-09-04 3LwVn
In recent years, the on road accidents due to human error has drastically increased. Considering this situation, I completely agree that it will be better if every individuals in the society can go fo autonomous car instead of manual operating ones. Firstly, I would like to bring to notice that driverless cars have best safety. In other words, 94% of the accidents caused are due to human error. For example misapplication of car brakes on slippery or wet roads leads to large no of accidents which can be avoided using driverless cars. Secondly, driverless cars hold incredible promise of mobility options for elders, young and disabled user's. In addition, it will benefit individually without the proper knowledge of driving and he/she will be easily able to travel their desired places. It is estimated in US that more than 20 million people have disabilities which makes impossible to move outside the house, thus autonomous cars can be of great use here. In conclusion, I believe that having a driverless car can be safe and enjoyable. By 2025, every individual will have a autonomous car which will inturn decrease the accidents on roads and and every individual will have greater mobility options.
In recent years, the on road
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accidents
due to human error has
drastically
increased. Considering this situation, I completely
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agree
that it will be better if every
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individuals
in the society can go
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fo
autonomous
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car
instead
of manual operating ones.

Firstly
, I would like to bring to notice that driverless
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cars
have best safety.
In other words
, 94% of the
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accidents
caused are due to human error.
For example
misapplication of
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car
brakes on slippery or wet roads leads to large
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no
of
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accidents
which can
be avoided
using driverless cars.

Secondly
, driverless
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cars
hold incredible promise of mobility options for elders, young and disabled user's.
In addition
, it will benefit
individually
without the proper knowledge of
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driving and
he/she will be
easily
able to travel their desired places. It
is estimated
in US that more than 20 million
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people
have disabilities which
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makes
impossible to
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move
outside the
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house
,
thus
autonomous
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cars
can be of great
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use
here.

In conclusion
, I believe that having a driverless
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car
can be safe and enjoyable. By 2025, every individual will have
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a
autonomous
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car
which will
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inturn
decrease the
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accidents
on roads
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and and
every individual will have greater mobility options.
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IELTS essay Writing task 2( essay) It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. with the statement？ Keywords: car Type: Agree & Disagree Tested on: 2021-09-04

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
200 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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