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Writing task 2( essay) It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement？ Keywords: car Type: Agree & Disagree Tested on: 2021-09-04

Writing task 2( essay) It will be better for society and individuals if driverless cars are widely used. with the statement？ Keywords: car Type: Agree & Disagree Tested on: 2021-09-04 3LwVn

In recent years, the on road accidents due to human error has drastically increased. Considering this situation, I completely agree that it will be better if every individuals in the society can go fo autonomous car instead of manual operating ones. Firstly, I would like to bring to notice that driverless cars have best safety. In other words, 94% of the accidents caused are due to human error. For example misapplication of car brakes on slippery or wet roads leads to large no of accidents which can be avoided using driverless cars. Secondly, driverless cars hold incredible promise of mobility options for elders, young and disabled user's. In addition, it will benefit individually without the proper knowledge of driving and he/she will be easily able to travel their desired places. It is estimated in US that more than 20 million people have disabilities which makes impossible to move outside the house, thus autonomous cars can be of great use here. In conclusion, I believe that having a driverless car can be safe and enjoyable. By 2025, every individual will have a autonomous car which will inturn decrease the accidents on roads and and every individual will have greater mobility options.

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agree
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individuals
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car
instead
 of manual operating ones.

Firstly
, I would like to bring to notice that driverless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 have best safety. In other words
, 94% of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisastermishapcalamitysetbackhazardpileup
accidents
 caused are due to human error. For example
 misapplication of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 brakes on slippery or wet roads leads to large Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisastermishapcalamitysetbackhazardpileup
accidents
 which can be avoided
 using driverless cars.

Secondly
, driverless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 hold incredible promise of mobility options for elders, young and disabled user's. In addition
, it will benefit individually
 without the proper knowledge of Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).driving, and
driving and
 he/she will be easily
 able to travel their desired places. It is estimated
 in US that more than 20 million This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 have disabilities which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createsconstructsmanufacturesproduces
makes
 impossible to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 outside the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
, thus
 autonomous You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 can be of great This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 here.

In conclusion
, I believe that having a driverless You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 can be safe and enjoyable. By 2025, every individual will have Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
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car
 which will Possible spelling mistake found.internin turnint urn
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 decrease the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisastermishapcalamitysetbackhazardpileup
accidents
 on roads Possible typo: you repeated a wordand
and and
 every individual will have greater mobility options. 