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Newspapers have influenced people's ideas and

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Nowadays, newspapers are the most convenient way for getting an information. By reading ideas are broaden to a large extent. I believe that, this has a positive development. I have elaborated my views in the upcoming paragraphs. Firstly, people read a lot of newspapers in their leisure time, which leads to change their opinion on a particular topic. Therefore, this helps the people to accept the thoughts of a writer. For example, there are many arricles in a newspaper regarding the healthy life style which has influenced the people opinion. Secondly, it has a brief idea. There is quite a times when, there is an articles, that has a whole explanation which, sometimes not available in television. To put in another words, there are situation when television do not have a whole summary but newspaper has a entire overview. Futhermore, there is variety of topics. People has a right to choose an article based on their choice. For instance, many people prefer fashion articles over sports. On the other hand, information is outdated. There are many a times when news printed in newspaper is outdated or complete. This creates a negative impact on people's idea when, they lack a particular information. For example, during pandemic there were fasley updates on covid-19 which, created a negative impression on people's mind. To sum up, newspapers where has a positive development also has a negative effect which cannot be overlooked. Both has a direct impact on people's opinions.
Nowadays,
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newspapers
are the most convenient way for getting an information. By reading
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ideas
are
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to a large extent. I believe that, this has a
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positive
development. I have elaborated my views in the upcoming paragraphs.

Firstly
,
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people
read
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a lot of
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newspapers
in their leisure time, which leads to
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change
their opinion on a particular topic.
Therefore
, this
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helps
the
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people
to accept the thoughts of a writer.
For example
, there are
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many
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arricles
in a
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newspaper
regarding the healthy life style which has influenced the
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people
opinion.
Secondly
, it has a brief
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idea
. There is quite
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a times
when,
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there is an articles
, that has a whole explanation which,
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sometimes
not available in television. To put in
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, there are
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situation
when television do not have a whole summary
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but
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newspaper
has
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a
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Futhermore
, there is variety of topics.
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People
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has
a right to choose an article based on their choice.
For instance
,
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many
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people
prefer fashion articles over sports.

On the other hand
, information
is outdated
. There are
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many
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a times
when news printed in
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newspaper
is outdated
or complete. This creates a
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negative
impact on
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people
's
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idea
when, they lack
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a particular information
.
For example
, during pandemic there were
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fasley
updates on
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covid-19
which, created a
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negative
impression on
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people
's mind.

To sum up,
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newspapers
where has a
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positive
development
also
has a
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negative
effect which cannot
be overlooked
. Both has a direct impact on
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people
's opinions.

IELTS essay Newspapers have influenced people's ideas and

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
245 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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