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The expression never.never give up means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals.do you agree or disagree with this statement.

The expression never. never give up means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. D6J6A
When the achievements of human beings are considered by a means to an end and never give up attitude is that it enables us to preserve. in my opinion, I agree with this statement. To begin with, in today's sophisticated world it must be borne in mind that Although, there are a number of people achieved spectacular success in spite of all odds by dint of hard work. some employees they extremely hard-working and provides best result to companies. They think one day achieve their goal in life. For instance, . I talk about scientists Edison, he started invented on electricity. When, he was 8 year old and no knowledge about any experiment. On the contrary he invention on electricity. That time, he faced unsuccessful around 100 times. However, he never give up to their work and one day, he successful and invented electric bulb.
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started
invented on electricity. When, he was 8 year
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and no knowledge about any experiment.
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he invention
on electricity. That time, he faced unsuccessful around 100 times.
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give
up to their work and one day,
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successful and invented electric bulb.
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IELTS essay The expression never. never give up means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals.

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