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The cryptocurrencies as a volatile investment

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Today I am writing about the most famous cryptocurrencies. Maybe you are not familliar with any of them, but I am certain that you have heard or read abou Bitcoin and Ethereum. Criptocurrencies are a volatile invesment asset that has become popular the latest years. Some people considered cryptocurrencies as an easy way to earn money, even when it has been said by many financial advisors that it is high risky to invest in these assets.
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cryptocurrencies. Maybe you are not
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with any of them,
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Bitcoin and Ethereum.
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asset that has become popular the latest years.
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considered cryptocurrencies as an easy way to earn money, even when it has
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financial advisors that it is high risky to invest in these assets.
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IELTS essay The cryptocurrencies as a volatile investment

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