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The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree? v.6

The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree? v. 6
Nowadays, people are aware of the environmental problems around the world and their side effects. However, they cannot face or solve that kind of issues by themselves, because big organizations and the government must improve that situation, curtailing the injuries that it brings to the population. In my opinion, I believe that common humans should participate in campaigns to promote environmental caring, but a solid resolution is a government and big organizations, such Green Pace, task. First of all, everybody can do something to take care of our world, it does not matter if the result of that is just a small help. For example, Joining of big campaigns and mobilizations to promote a better use of natural resources or knowing how to recycle stuff that we use every day is an amazing idea. On the other hand, Government and big organizations are very responsible to solve the major damage generated by environmental problems. For instance, the government of each country can convene to a global meeting and then expose the different ways to face this huge issue, all the countries together with a common cause which is save the world of the catastrophic consequences of this dramatic problem. To sum up, each person can cooperate to improve the awful effects that environmental problems cause the whole humanity. But, is crucial, that big social companies and the authority have to make a deep work and effort to solve it, and supporting to all populations which want to collaborate with them.
Nowadays,
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people
are aware of the
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environmental
problems around the world and their side effects.
However
, they cannot face or solve that kind of issues by themselves,
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because
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big
organizations and the
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government
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must
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improve
that situation, curtailing the injuries that it brings to the population. In my opinion, I believe that common humans should participate in campaigns to promote
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environmental
caring,
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but
a solid resolution is a
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government
and
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big
organizations, such Green Pace, task.

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First of all
, everybody can do something to take care of our world, it does not matter if the result of
that is
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just
a
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small
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help
.
For example
, Joining of
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big
campaigns and mobilizations to promote a better
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use
of natural resources or knowing how to recycle stuff that we
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use
every day is an amazing
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idea
.

On the other hand
,
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Government
and
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big
organizations are
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very
responsible to solve the major damage generated by
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environmental
problems.
For instance
, the
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government
of each country can convene to a global meeting and then expose the
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different
ways to face this huge issue, all the countries together with a common cause which is
The word "save" is a verb. Did you mean the adjective "safe"?
save
the world of the catastrophic consequences of this dramatic problem.

To sum up, each person can cooperate to
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improve
the awful effects that
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environmental
problems cause the whole humanity.
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But
, is crucial, that
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big
social
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companies
and the authority
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have to
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make
a deep work and effort to solve it, and supporting to all populations which want to collaborate with them.
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IELTS essay The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So government and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. The what extent so you agreed or disagree? v. 6

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
8
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 8.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 8.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 8.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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