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The environment we live in is in danger due to various problems. What are the underlying causes? Who is responsible to combat this?

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The government should get up from a long slumber and initiate a government-sponsored awareness campaign. Hopefully, we can raise awareness among the public through an effective advertising campaign that could warn the people of the dangers of pollution. We can do that by disseminating flyers and brochures which outline the drawbacks. We should also include a new subject in the curriculum to teach young pupils about the perils of pollution and teach them how they can as individuals prevent it. In addition to that, policymakers should introduce new laws and regulations which restrict car usage as well as ensure that the public will follow them and, in some cases, impose strict punishments for the defaulters, such as huge fines or even imprisonment. Thus, government support is necessary for fighting against pollution.

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