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secret of successful people

secret of successful people GN23Q
Successful people doesn’t success their entire life to cash the actual success at the very end. To begin with, I would describe who are field people in the school life. People who fail in the school or academic life it be cause several problems themselves. It could be categorized as domestic issues social issues or economical gaps. Facing this inconveniences, people who intended to giving up their academical pathways cause that mention of problems will appear promisingly among their lives. For instance, countries like South India, Africa, children who couldn’t even think about what school life rather than finding some thing to eat which is way more important to survive. In other hand, people who experienced domestic violence, social cabs, they couldn’t focus on studies due to their distracting lifestyles. Besides, failing continuously would create self discourage in some ways, so it is resolved to people on that situation who are dragging backwards. Conversely, people who have a good health and family background with enough money will take the lead similarly because they have fair reasons for that. Accordingly, these obstacles on people who categorize as school life failures have more qualities on their own rather than success schoolers. Why am saying this for now is because if someone would be able to jump out every hurdles that faced in their paws lives, that person would be able to overcome any difficulties that may face in future. In other words, that will be the use of practicing good qualities and self motivations. By developing qualities like Courage, self independence, self-confidence, strength and ability to take any risk that cause of self success call mom no matter how many times were filled in their lives. Albert Einstein, the great scientist forever who were filled hundred and thousand times and that was his lesson to be success one day and it have been become a reality which is the best example I could ever stated here At last, I would say that people having unpleasant history on their own lives that is not to be regret In spite of that should be proud on themselves because in the end they are achieving the utmost victory through the fullest sense of the word self fortitude.
Successful
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success
their entire
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life
to cash the actual
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success
at the
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begin
with, I would
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describe
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who
are field
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people
in the
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school
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life
.
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People
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who
fail in the
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school
or academic
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life
it
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be cause
several problems themselves. It could
be categorized
as domestic issues social issues or economical gaps. Facing this inconveniences,
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people
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who
intended to
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giving
up their academical pathways cause that mention of problems will appear
promisingly
among their
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lives
.
For instance
, countries like South India, Africa, children
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who
couldn’t even
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think
about what
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school
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life
rather
than finding
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some thing
to eat which is way more
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important
to survive. In other hand,
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people
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who
experienced domestic violence, social cabs, they couldn’t focus on studies due to their distracting lifestyles.
Besides
, failing
continuously
would create self discourage in
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some
ways,
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so
it
is resolved
to
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people
on that situation
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who
are dragging backwards.
Conversely
,
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people
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who
have a
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good
health and family background with
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enough
money will take the lead
similarly
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because
they have
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fair
reasons for that.

Accordingly
, these obstacles on
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people
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who
categorize as
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school
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life
failures have more qualities on their
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own
rather
than
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success
schoolers. Why
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am
saying this for
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now
is
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because
if someone would be able to jump out every
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hurdles
that faced in their paws
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lives
, that person would be able to overcome any difficulties that may face
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in future
.
In other words
, that will be the
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use
of practicing
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good
qualities and self motivations.

By developing qualities like Courage, self independence, self-confidence, strength and ability to take any
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risk
that cause of self
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success
call mom no matter how
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many
times
were filled
in their
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lives
. Albert Einstein, the great scientist forever
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who
were filled
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hundred
and
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thousand
times and that was his lesson to be
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success
one day and it
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have
been become
a reality which is the best example I could ever stated
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here


At last, I would say that
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people
having unpleasant history on their
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own
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lives
that is
not to be regret
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In spite of
that should be proud on themselves
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because
in the
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end
they are achieving the utmost victory through the fullest sense of the word self fortitude.
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IELTS essay secret of successful people

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
372 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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