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THE EARTH IS SUFFERING FROM MANY BASIC PROBLEMS AND STILL GOVERNMENT OF DIFFERENT COUNTRIES ARE SPENDING HUGE AMOUNTS OF MONEY ON SPACE EXPLORATION. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT?

THE EARTH IS SUFFERING FROM MANY BASIC PROBLEMS AND STILL GOVERNMENT OF DIFFERENT COUNTRIES ARE SPENDING HUGE AMOUNTS OF MONEY ON SPACE EXPLORATION. joMMN
AS MANY COUNTRIES ARE FACING SEVERAL DIFFICULTIES FULFILLING DAILY NEEDS, EVEN SO, A LARGE NUMBER OF FUNDS ARE BEING SPENT ON SPACE RESEARCH BY THE GOVERNMENT OF DISTINCT NATIONS. IN MY OPINION, ALTHOUGH THE SPACE EXPLORATION BRINGS THE SOLUTION TO MANY UNFORESEEN EVENTS, IT IS UNLIKELY TO UNNOTICED THE BASIC NEEDS OF COUNTRY PEOPLE. IT MUST BE ADMITTED THAT MANY NATIONS ARE SUFFERING FROM THE PROBLEMS SUCH AS POVERTY, UNEMPLOYMENT, HEALTH FACILITIES, PROPER EDUCATION, ELECTRICITY AND ARE STILL UNDERDEVELOPED. IN THAT REGARD, RATHER THAN SPENDING AN EXORBITANT AMOUNT OF FUNDS ON SPACE RESEARCH, GOVERNMENT SHOULD INVEST SOME PROPORTION TO THE GROWTH OF VARIOUS NECESSITIES OF THE PEOPLE. FOR EXAMPLE, TO ELIMINATE PROBLEMS LIKE POVERTY, GOVERNMENT SHOULD UPDATE THE OUTDATED EDUCATION SYSTEM WHICH IS THE ULTIMATE ROOT OF ILLITERACY AND UNEMPLOYMENT. MOREOVER, PEOPLE ALSO FACE THE HEALTH PROBLEMS AS MANY RURAL AND REMOTE AREAS DO NOT REACH OUT FOR MEDICAL HELP. ALSO, MANY SUCH AREAS ARE HINDERED BY ELECTRICITY AND ARE NOT HAVING A PROPER LIGHT CONNECTION. THUS, MONEY SHOULD BE SPENT ON PROVIDING HEALTH AND POWER SUPPLY. ON THE CONTRARY, THERE IS SOME USEFULNESS OF SPACE RESEARCH. HENCE, IT BECOMES WORTHFUL TO SPEND A MINIMAL AMOUNT OF CAPITAL ON IT. SPACE RESEARCH HAS GIFTED MUCH FRUITFUL INFORMATION AND MAKE US AWARE OF THE EVENTS LIKE METEOR SHOWERS OR STRIKING OF COMET AND MANY MORE. FURTHERMORE, FUNDING SPACE ORGANISATION BRINGS REVOLUTION IN THE BUSINESS SECTOR. AS THE BUSINESSES ARE SPREAD GLOBALLY, COMMUNICATION BECOMES NECESSARY TO RUN THE BUSINESS EFFECTIVELY. FOR THIS THE SATELLITES NEED TO BE LAUNCHED IN THE ORBIT, WHICH HAS UTTERLY BECOME POSSIBLE WITH THE HELP OF SPACE CENTRES. TO CONCLUDE, I FIRMLY BELIEVE THAT GOVERNMENTS OF DIFFERENT NATIONS SHOULD NOT ONLY FUND THE SPACE EXPLORATION BUT ALSO SHOULD TAKE, THE PROBLEMS FACED BY THE COUNTRY PEOPLE, INTO CONSIDERATION. NONETHELESS, THEY SHOULD PROVIDE THE FACILITIES TO ELIMINATE SOME BASIC PROBLEMS LIKE POVERTY AND HEALTH PROBLEMS FOR THE BETTERMENT OF PEOPLE AND DEVELOPING THEIR COUNTRIES.
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ARE FACING SEVERAL DIFFICULTIES FULFILLING DAILY NEEDS, EVEN
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A LARGE NUMBER OF
FUNDS ARE
BEING SPENT
ON
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SPACE
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RESEARCH
BY THE
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GOVERNMENT
OF DISTINCT NATIONS. IN MY OPINION, ALTHOUGH THE
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EXPLORATION BRINGS THE SOLUTION TO
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UNFORESEEN
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, IT IS UNLIKELY TO UNNOTICED THE BASIC NEEDS OF
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COUNTRY
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PEOPLE
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IT
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NATIONS ARE SUFFERING FROM THE
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PROBLEMS
SUCH AS POVERTY, UNEMPLOYMENT,
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HEALTH
FACILITIES, PROPER EDUCATION, ELECTRICITY AND ARE
STILL
UNDERDEVELOPED. IN THAT REGARD,
RATHER
THAN SPENDING AN EXORBITANT AMOUNT OF FUNDS ON
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RESEARCH
,
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SHOULD INVEST
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SOME
PROPORTION TO THE GROWTH OF VARIOUS NECESSITIES OF THE
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FOR EXAMPLE
, TO ELIMINATE
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PROBLEMS
LIKE POVERTY,
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GOVERNMENT
SHOULD UPDATE THE OUTDATED EDUCATION SYSTEM WHICH IS THE ULTIMATE ROOT OF ILLITERACY AND UNEMPLOYMENT.
MOREOVER
,
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PEOPLE
ALSO
FACE THE
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HEALTH
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PROBLEMS
AS
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RURAL AND REMOTE AREAS DO NOT REACH OUT FOR MEDICAL
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ALSO
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MANY
SUCH AREAS
ARE HINDERED
BY ELECTRICITY AND ARE NOT HAVING A PROPER LIGHT CONNECTION.
THUS
, MONEY SHOULD
BE SPENT
ON PROVIDING
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AND POWER SUPPLY.

ON THE CONTRARY
, THERE IS
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USEFULNESS OF
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HENCE
, IT BECOMES
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WORTHFUL
TO SPEND A MINIMAL AMOUNT OF CAPITAL ON IT.
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HAS GIFTED MUCH FRUITFUL INFORMATION AND
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EVENTS
LIKE METEOR SHOWERS OR STRIKING OF COMET AND
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ORGANISATION
BRINGS REVOLUTION IN THE BUSINESS SECTOR. AS THE BUSINESSES
ARE SPREAD
GLOBALLY, COMMUNICATION BECOMES NECESSARY TO RUN THE BUSINESS
EFFECTIVELY
. FOR THIS THE SATELLITES NEED TO
BE LAUNCHED
IN THE ORBIT, WHICH HAS
UTTERLY
BECOME POSSIBLE WITH THE
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CENTRES
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TO CONCLUDE
, I
FIRMLY
BELIEVE THAT
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EXPLORATION
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PROBLEMS
FACED BY THE
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, INTO CONSIDERATION. NONETHELESS, THEY SHOULD PROVIDE THE FACILITIES TO ELIMINATE
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BASIC
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LIKE POVERTY AND
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IELTS essay THE EARTH IS SUFFERING FROM MANY BASIC PROBLEMS AND STILL GOVERNMENT OF DIFFERENT COUNTRIES ARE SPENDING HUGE AMOUNTS OF MONEY ON SPACE EXPLORATION.

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