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The digram shows the method of making orange juice

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The information about the process, in which orange juice is made is depicted by the rendered pictorial representation. In overview, it can be apparently seen that, in this digram two type of juices are making. To commence with, firstly, fresh oranges are collected. Secondly these send to factory, where these are washed with the aid machine. Thirdly, oranges are send into extract, in which they collect not only juice, but also the soild waste that used for animal feed while, the half juice are packed and transfar to market. And other half keep in refrigerator truck. After this, with the assist of evaporation technology, water is remove than the juice pour into cans. On next stage, juice is sending to warehouse or factory. Nextly, they add some water in this fruit juice. At last, its time for packing and than sending to shop.
The information about the process, in which orange
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juice
is made
is depicted
by the rendered pictorial representation. In overview, it can be
apparently
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seen
that, in this
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digram
two type of
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juices
are making. To commence with,
firstly
, fresh oranges
are collected
.
Secondly
these
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send
to factory, where these
are washed
with the aid machine.
Thirdly
, oranges are
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send
into extract, in which they collect not
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only
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juice
,
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but
also
the
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soild
waste that
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used
for animal feed while, the half
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juice
are packed
and
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transfar
to market. And other half
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keep
in refrigerator truck. After this, with the assist of evaporation technology, water is remove than the
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juice
pour into cans. On
next
stage,
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juice
is sending to warehouse or factory.
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Nextly
, they
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add
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some
water in this fruit
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juice
. At last, its time for packing and
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than
sending to shop.
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IELTS essay The digram shows the method of making orange juice

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
143 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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