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The digram shows the method of making orange juice

The digram shows the method of making orange juice Rw2GG

The information about the process, in which orange juice is made is depicted by the rendered pictorial representation. In overview, it can be apparently seen that, in this digram two type of juices are making. To commence with, firstly, fresh oranges are collected. Secondly these send to factory, where these are washed with the aid machine. Thirdly, oranges are send into extract, in which they collect not only juice, but also the soild waste that used for animal feed while, the half juice are packed and transfar to market. And other half keep in refrigerator truck. After this, with the assist of evaporation technology, water is remove than the juice pour into cans. On next stage, juice is sending to warehouse or factory. Nextly, they add some water in this fruit juice. At last, its time for packing and than sending to shop.

The information about the process, in which orange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is made
is depicted
 by the rendered pictorial representation. In overview, it can be apparently
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seen
 that, in this Possible spelling mistake found.diagramdig ram
digram
 two type of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juices
 are making. To commence with, firstly
, fresh oranges are collected
. Secondly
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send
 to factory, where these are washed
 with the aid machine. Thirdly
, oranges are Consider using a past participle here: "sent".sent
send
 into extract, in which they collect not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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juice
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but
also
 the Possible spelling mistake found.soldsoilsolidsoilssoiled
soild
 waste that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for animal feed while, the half You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
are packed
 and Possible spelling mistake found.transfertrans far
transfar
 to market. And other half This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in refrigerator truck. After this, with the assist of evaporation technology, water is remove than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 pour into cans. On next
 stage, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 is sending to warehouse or factory. Possible spelling mistake found.Neatly
Nextly
, they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
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some
 water in this fruit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
. At last, its time for packing and Did you mean "then"?then
than
 sending to shop. 