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The digram illustrates the process of making biodiesel.

The digram illustrates the process of making biodiesel. 5LNRp
The way of making producing biodiesel has been depicted by the pictorial illustrate. Overall it can be clearly seen that there that there are tottal 8 stages involved in this process. It begin with the process of photosynthesis and ends with using the biodiesel for running the vehicles. In the initial stage the method pf photosynthesis take place which helps the oil crops to grow. Onces the crops grow propely the flowers are dried up. After that the oil is extrated from the seeds which is knows as crud oil. The after this oil is send for the refining where it is refined thus it is called refined vegetable oil. In the next stage the process of transterfication take place, Here. the alchole is added in this oil which extract the giycrol. The extracted giycrol is used for different purpose, Such as food, and costmetic industries. Then after the remaning formed oil is biodiesel. Which is used for running the vehicles such as buses and many more. Finally the vehicles relesed the co2 in air. Which is further utilized for the purpose of photosynthesis. Hence this process continouos.
The way of making producing biodiesel has
been depicted
by the pictorial illustrate.

Overall
it can be
clearly
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seen
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that there that there
are
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tottal
8 stages involved in this
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process
. It
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begin
with the
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process
of photosynthesis and ends with using the biodiesel for running the vehicles.

In the initial stage the method pf photosynthesis take place which
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helps
the
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oil
crops to grow.
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Onces
the crops grow
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propely
the flowers
are dried
up. After that the
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oil
is
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extrated
from the seeds which is knows as crud
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oil
. The after this
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oil
is
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send
for the refining where it
is refined
thus
it
is called
refined vegetable oil.

In the
next
stage the
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process
of
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transterfication
take place, Here.
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the
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alchole
is
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added
in this
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oil
which extract the
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giycrol
. The extracted
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giycrol
is
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used
for
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different
purpose, Such as food, and
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costmetic
industries. Then after the
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remaning
formed
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oil
is biodiesel. Which is
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used
for running the vehicles such as buses and
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many
more.
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Finally
the vehicles
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relesed
the co2 in air. Which is
further
utilized for the purpose of photosynthesis.
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Hence
this
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process
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continouos
.

IELTS essay The digram illustrates the process of making biodiesel.

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4 paragraphs
188 words
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