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The digital media is dominating the print media. what extent do you believe?

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As a fact, digital media has influenced the the global customers and accordingly dominated the print media. While pointing, the access to such a digital portal is fast and convenient to the customers. While, the printed media is delay and traditional to provide the message to its target community. I argue that digital media leads the print media in future. As this is elucidated that the digitalized medial is available anywhere and anytime whenever the customer prefers having the service. Furthermore, it can provide the live show also. Whereas, the print media are scheduled regarding the service and distribution. The fact that such print media consumes more time. This clarifies that digital media is more attractive than the print media. Hence the digitalized media may replace the print media in fiture.
As a fact, digital
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has influenced
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global customers and
accordingly
dominated the
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print
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media
. While pointing, the access to such a digital portal is
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fast
and convenient to the customers. While, the printed
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media
is delay and traditional to provide the message to its target community. I argue that digital
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media
leads the
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print
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media
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in future
. As this
is elucidated
that the digitalized medial is available anywhere and anytime whenever the customer prefers having the service.
Furthermore
, it can provide the
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live
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show
also
. Whereas, the
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print
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media
are scheduled
regarding the service and distribution. The fact that such
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print
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media
consumes more time. This clarifies that digital
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media
is more attractive than the
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print
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media
.
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Hence
the digitalized
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may replace the
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print
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in
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fiture
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IELTS essay The digital media is dominating the print media. what extent do you believe?

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