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The differences and similarities between living in a dormitory and living in a boarding house

The differences and similarities between living in a dormitory and living in a boarding house 85Jy5
Nowadays, students want to study in best college and university for their bright future. Although, dormitory house are provided by institutes, but some student live in the boarding house. This both are similar but they also has quiet different. In this essay, I shall put down the living variations as well as similarities in both living house. To commence with, those learner who study in out of their hometown. They living for few years in the those accommodations which available in the campus. College authority give the individual room to two or three group of students. In the other words, more then two students sharing the room together. However, some scholars also stay in the boarding house. It is similar life dormitory house, but in this house they have a choose for sharing the room or not. If student want to stay alone in the room then they can be live in a singal room as well as they can live with their roommate also. In additions, since, room are few steps far away from the campus, dormitory house are helping tremendously for saving travel expanses. On the one hand, people choose the location of house according their wish, if they want to stay in boarding house. In this case, they spending their money on traveling. Furthermore, campus accommodation are much costly rather than boarding house. To explicate, college has fixed fees of rooms and they do not provide any kind of relaxation in fees. While, the boarding house available in different price rang and student select one according to their budget. Some house also give the huge discount. In order to, student can afford it easily. Secondly, food facility also available in both accommodations. However, in the boarding house student had a option they can make their food by own, in this case they pay no extra money for food. In the dormitory house student have eat those which give by the campus kitchen staff. To conclude, both accommodation is extremely good for staying. Student has a more chooses in the boarding house rather than dormitory house. They also have a option for sharing the room or not. Food facility also available in both accommodation.
Nowadays,
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students
want to study
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in best
college and university for their bright future. Although,
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dormitory
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house
are provided
by institutes,
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but
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some
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student
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live
in the
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boarding
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house
. This both are similar
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but
they
also
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has
quiet
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different
. In this essay, I shall put down the living variations
as well
as similarities in both living
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house
.

To commence with,
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those learner
who study in out of their hometown.
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They living
for few years in the those accommodations which
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available
in the
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campus
. College authority give the individual
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room
to two or three group of
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students
. In the other words, more
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
then
two
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students
sharing the
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room
together.
However
,
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some
scholars
also
stay in the
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boarding
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house
. It is similar life
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dormitory
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house
,
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but
in this
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house
they have
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a choose
for sharing the
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room
or not. If
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student
want to stay alone in the
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room
then they can be
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live
in a
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singal
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room
as well
as they can
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live
with their roommate
also
. In additions, since,
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room
are few steps far away from the
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campus
,
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dormitory
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house
are helping
tremendously
for saving travel expanses. On the one hand,
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people
choose the location of
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house
according their wish, if they want to stay in
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boarding
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house
.
In this case
,
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they spending
their money on traveling.

Furthermore
,
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campus
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accommodation
are much costly
rather
than
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boarding
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house
. To explicate, college has
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fixed
fees of
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rooms and
they do not provide any kind of relaxation in fees. While, the
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boarding
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house
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available
in
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different
price rang and
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student
select one according to their budget.
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Some
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house
also
give the huge discount. In order to,
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student
can afford it
easily
.
Secondly
,
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food
facility
also
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available
in both accommodations.
However
, in the
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boarding
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house
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student
had
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a
option they can
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make
their
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food
by
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own
,
in this case
they pay no extra money for
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food
. In the
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dormitory
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house
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student
have
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eat
those which give by the
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campus
kitchen staff.

To conclude
, both
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accommodation
is
extremely
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good
for staying.
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Student
has a more chooses in the
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boarding
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house
rather
than
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dormitory
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house
. They
also
have
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a
option for sharing the
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room
or not.
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Food
facility
also
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available
in both
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accommodation
.
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IELTS essay The differences and similarities between living in a dormitory and living in a boarding house

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4 paragraphs
366 words
6.0
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