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online
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shopping
. Since the internet has become an integral part of our daily
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, it has
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their everyday necessities like groceries and even luxury items such as air tickets.
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, most
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current
busy lifestyles, I would like to argue that the advantages of
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online
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far outweigh the disadvantages of the same.

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residing in an
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ever changing
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paced world where every second counts.
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save
time and
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make
our
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lives
a
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little
less complicated,
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helps
to increase our standard of living. I believe that the internet and
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online
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shopping
offers exactly that solution. When a person is running on a packed schedule with back to back meetings along with various other personal and family commitments,
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online
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shopping
for daily needs like groceries can be a life saver. It
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saves
one's time in having to drive or take
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a public transport
to a
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center and then choosing the items needed for oneself. The same is true for when one is trying to plan a trip. When one can pick and choose
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itineries
that best suits them
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by swiping on one's phone the entire process of going to a travel agent and booking tickets in person seems that much more
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hasslesome
. I
also
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that
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online
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not
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saves
time
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can
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money. There is the
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added
costs on fuel and parking that
are accrued
in travelling to and from the
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also
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that when one goes to shop at a grocery store one ends up spending more than they would if they stuck to the list of things they need to
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purchase
. There is a tendency for most
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people
to
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diverted by the various products on
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which leads to
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more than needed. One could argue that the same could apply to when one is
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it is easier to stick to a list when
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. The other benefit of
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is that the products
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purchased
are delivered
to one's doorstep which can be an additional benefit for the elderly or for those who are unwell.

I do believe that
physically
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shopping
at the market or at a grocery store does have
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it's
advantages in giving a person a more holistic
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experience, where they can
properly
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see
, touch and assess the products
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before
purchasing them.
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But
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given
the fact that most
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are
constantly
on the run, I believe the advantages of
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far outweigh the disadvantages.
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IELTS essay The diagrams below show the design for a wave-energy machine and its location

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
449 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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