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The diagram show as map and a plan of a school in 1985 and noe

The diagram show as map and a plan of a school in 1985 and noe ORB6k

The maps show a road system as it is now and the proposed changes in future to reduce the number of traffic incidents and accidents. The plans show the layout of a bookstore in 2000 and the alterations to the bookstore in the present day. In general, the layout of the bookstore has been significantly changed, with the majority of the changes being on the left-hand side of the room. A number of features have been moved or modified, while additional facilities have been added. In 2000, there was a large section dedicated to fiction books on the left-hand side of the store. However, that section has been divided into four new, smaller sections where books on hobbies, cookery, fiction and a small art section are now displayed.

The maps This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 a road system as it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 and the proposed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 in future to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 the number of traffic incidents and accidents. The plans This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 the layout of a bookstore in 2000 and the alterations to the bookstore in the present day.

In general
, the layout of the bookstore has been significantly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
, with the majority of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :altersadjusts
changes
 being on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand side of the room.

A number of features have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 or modified, while additional facilities have been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
.

In 2000, there was a large You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
 dedicated to fiction books on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
-hand side of the store. However
, that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
 has been divided
 into four new, smaller You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
sections
 where books on hobbies, cookery, fiction and a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 art You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcategorysectorzonedistrictarearegion
section
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 displayed. 