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The diagram below show how RO (reserve osamsis)works to get cleaning water

The diagram below show how RO (reserve osamsis)works to get cleaning water kWm2K
The diagram illustrates the process by reverse osmosis to get healthy drinking water. Overall, We can seen that there are numerous stages in the process of Contimated feed water to the final clean faucet water. In the fist step, Contimated feed water is pass through the three stages of Pre-carbon filters, the filtered water is pass through auto shut off valve. In the fourth stage that us Ro membrane the filter water passes through a flow restrictor in this stage impure water is drained off through drain water outlet and water pass is through the next level of RO water treatment process. In Addition, the filter water from RO membrane is pass through another which contains multi filtering layers. After the tank water is pass from auto shut off valve which is connected to the storage filter water. In the next step, the water is either pass through fifth stage post carbon filter or stored in the storage tank. After the fifth stage post carbon filter the clean faucet water can be taken out for drinking.
The diagram illustrates the process by reverse osmosis to
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outlet and
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IELTS essay The diagram below show how RO (reserve osamsis)works to get cleaning water

Essay
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3 paragraphs
176 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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