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Nokia share price March 2004 - Marich 2005

Nokia share price March 2004 - Marich 2005 EwEEQ

This chart iilustrates Nokia’s stock price in period between March 2004 to March 2005. The unit is measured by US Dollars. It is obvious to see that overall this chart fluctuated wildly in the period given. On the first month, Nokia’s share price reached a peak before it dropped slightly in the following month. It continued to recover slightly and plummeting in the last week of April 2004. The stock price fluctuating subsequently and rose slowly in the end of the time given. At the first glace, this figure reached a high with almost $24 at the began of the period and dipped slightly to $20 before it rose slowly in the mid-April although it began to plummeted rapidly and dropped, which was approximately two fold compared to March 2004. Nokia’s share price consistently moved up in mid-June and began to up and down slightly until middle of July. Finally, it fell to the lowest point before September and had a slight fluctuation before the stock escalated gradually to $16 in the following period of time and had a small flutter until 2005. In February 2005, the share price levelled off again to the amount of $14 before it went up moderately to $16 on the end of period given.

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