Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The demend for foodis increasing worldwide. why has it happened? What measures could the international community take to improve the situation.

The demend for foodis increasing worldwide. why has it happened? What measures could the international community take to improve the situation. VBYmQ
In our globalization tense, people's requirements such as accomadations, well-paid jobs, espacially for natural sustenances are rising up around the world. Therefore, it requires producing several kind of food as soon as possible to spend on less energy. The main reason for this from my point of view is increasing of population cosistently in the different continents and countries. Further more nearly all types of gigantic companies and manufacturers are paying attention to produce electronic goods such as gadgets, cars also construction materials. Besides, most amount of money which kept in the budgets of developed coutries are wasting to explore space instead of solving which imminent food scarcity problems. On the other hand, affecting of environmental pollution originated to demage ecological balance also could play important role, namely busting of under endangered available sustenances and number of vermins. To solve a lake of food issues is in my opinion, we should create new valid products which humans can consume and develope food industry just as agriculture, farming like those. Moreover we have to improvise new nutritious outputs also plants and trees whichever can grow and tolerant on the arid or semi-arid zones or regions. In addition those products should be inexpensive to purchase all contingents of population likewise to be important for their physical and mental health. In order to achieve positive result, the organizations and governments must draw attention to this situations seriously. Not only them but even all countries and entrepreneures whom run of their own primary industries(fishing, farming). To sum up, we can not ban number of births, therefore, the foodstuff problem always takes possession in our future and we should resolve those issues relying on contemporary skills.
In our globalization tense,
people
's requirements such as
accomadations
, well-paid jobs,
espacially
for natural
sustenances
are rising up around the world.
Therefore
, it requires producing
several kind
of
food
as
soon
as possible to spend on less energy. The main reason for this from my point of view is increasing of population
cosistently
in the
different
continents and countries.
Further
more
nearly
all types of gigantic
companies
and manufacturers are paying attention to produce electronic
goods
such as gadgets, cars
also
construction materials.
Besides
, most amount of money which
kept
in the budgets of developed
coutries
are wasting to explore space
instead
of solving which imminent
food
scarcity problems.
On the other hand
, affecting of environmental pollution originated to
demage
ecological balance
also
could play
important
role,
namely
busting of under endangered available
sustenances
and number of
vermins
. To solve a lake of
food
issues is in my opinion, we should create new valid products which humans can consume and
develope
food
industry
just
as agriculture, farming like those.
Moreover
we
have to
improvise new nutritious outputs
also
plants and trees whichever can grow and tolerant on the arid or semi-arid zones or regions. In
addition
those products should be inexpensive to
purchase
all contingents of population
likewise
to be
important
for their physical and mental health. In order to achieve
positive
result, the organizations and
governments
must
draw attention to
this
situations
seriously
. Not
only
them
but
even all countries and
entrepreneures
whom run of their
own
primary industries(fishing, farming). To sum up, we can not ban number of births,
therefore
, the foodstuff problem always takes possession in our
future and
we should resolve those issues relying on contemporary
skills
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay The demend for foodis increasing worldwide. why has it happened? What measures could the international community take to improve the situation.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
281 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts