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Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. RNVKV
Nowadays, the number of people do not aware regarding environmental problem. I competely eye to eye this views. To commence with, there are various reason many people who are not concious about environment condition. First of all, generly, indviuals do not give to much attention how the climate change and destroy the environment. it is only the crises occure such as flooding, tsunami the reason of this but people soon forgetten this situation and ignore again. Another reason enviornment issue people who are not know about enough. just they only listen about global warming and environment condition. they do not fully understood. many people also belive this problem will not impact society for another 50 to 100 years. Conciquently, they think it will be delt by further generation. To sum up, many people fully aware about this problem but many ignore it
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the environment.
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the crises
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listen about global warming and environment condition.
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IELTS essay Most people do not care enough about environmental issues.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
141 words
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