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Many countries are worried about the damage to the economy that coronavirus is causing. Give some examples of how coronavirus is damaging the economy and suggest possible solutions.

Many countries are worried about the damage to the economy that coronavirus is causing. Give some examples of how coronavirus is damaging the economy and suggest possible solutions. e5bV7

By the beginning of 2020 and the world is facing numerous issues that lead anxiety spreading among countries. One of these examples is corona virus outbreaks. Corona virus makes the factories shutting down, which affect the recession negatively, moreover people are panicking. Many evidences mention that carnivorous came from bats in china, furthermore corona virus can kill people if severe symptoms are shown and this pandemic keeps spreading. And it seems that the rush period of the virus will remain for a long time. Which force countries take strict actions to prevent the corona virus. They set resolutions to overcome this obstacle. They impose curfew, shut down schools and universities and close entertainment places which means less activities are happening in the country. For example, if the curfew imposed the vehicles will not move which means there is no need for the fossil fuels. However, countries such as the United Arab Emirates and Saudi Arabia export grease to America in result of excess amount of coat they have, thereby the coat costs is remarkable decreasing and it is cheaper than the one bottle of water because nobody buys oil. Countries are concerned because the economy reaches rock bottom. If recession decays the country will go bankrupt and people will not take their salary. A lot of countries tackled this problem with wise resolutions. They do distance working and learning instead of stopping the work because if the education stops the recession will never develop. With this solution people can continue their work without any barriers. Additionally, existing of online shopping can stimulate the buy and sell method among people. The economy is an essential factor for the country to prosper. Corona virus pandemic are affecting the economy and countries are nervous about losing their funds. Thus, force the countries impose distance learning and working to ease the issue.

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 are panicking.

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. They set resolutions to overcome this obstacle. They impose curfew, shut down schools and universities and close entertainment places which means Did you mean "fewer"? The noun activities is countable.fewer
less
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. For example
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move
 which means there is no need for the fossil fuels. However
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countries
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 oil.

Countries are concerned
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because
 the economy reaches rock bottom. If recession decays the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 will go bankrupt and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 will not take their salary. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
A lot of
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countries
 tackled this problem with wise resolutions. They do distance working and learning instead
 of stopping the work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
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stops
 the recession will never develop. With this solution You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcrowdfamilycommunitynationsocietypublic
people
 can continue their work without any barriers. Additionally
, existing of online shopping can stimulate the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 and sell method among This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
.

The economy is an essential factor for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withrusticbucolichomeyagrarianprovincial
country
 to prosper. Corona You use this word too often, consider replacing it withillnessailmentsicknessdiseaseinfectiongerm
virus
 pandemic are affecting the economy and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 are nervous about losing their funds. Thus
, force the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlandpeopleregioncommunitysocietystate
countries
 impose distance learning and working to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
ease
 the issue. 