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The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong. NMlPj
It is firmly admitted that people have to understand that making an accurate decision needs to be thought carefully and slowly, which is also a normal part of adult life and could learn or be taught during their childhood. So, there is no doubt in my mind that very fast decisions are clearly wrong due to its inconsiderateness and being time-consuming. First of all, quick decisions do not consist of due deliberation. People do not consider all aspects of a problem in a short time, so they choose a determination based on their reasonable predictions. Only after it is handled, do they realize that it is not the greatest choice as they have ever thought of. Thus, not spending enough time to make a decision can lead to some worse situations. Secondly, it is generally thought that a fast decision contributes to complete as soon as possible while it is fallacious because decisions made in a haste waste time. Once executing hasty decisions, they feel fuzzy in next stages of plan and therefore will encounter several obstacles that they have to take too much time to solve. Hence, it is long time to finish despite of being fast at the beginning. On the other hand, right decisions can be still made quickly by those who acquire enormous enough amount of experience, knowledge and skill because it is acknowledged that they could learn to develop their habit of reasoned decision-making. Accordingly, to reach a fast and correct decision seems to be possible for them. All in all, it is deep analysis and proper time that helps to find out right decisions, so making decisions quickly can never be more effective. Also, be careful whenever deciding anything or unfortunate results may occur.
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firmly
admitted that
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people
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have to
understand that making an accurate
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decision
needs to be
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thought
carefully
and
slowly
, which is
also
a normal part of adult life and could learn or
be taught
during their childhood.
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, there is no doubt in my mind that
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very
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fast
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decisions
are
clearly
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wrong
due to its inconsiderateness and being time-consuming.

This phrase is redundant. Consider using "first".
First of all
, quick
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decisions
do not consist of due deliberation.
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People
do not consider all aspects of a problem in a short
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time
,
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so
they choose a determination based on their reasonable predictions.
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Only
after it
is handled
, do they realize that it is not the greatest choice as they have ever
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thought
of.
Thus
, not spending
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enough
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time
to
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make
a
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decision
can lead to
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some
worse situations.

Secondly
, it is
generally
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thought
that a
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fast
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decision
contributes to complete as
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soon
as possible while it is fallacious
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because
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decisions
made in a haste waste
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time
. Once executing hasty
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decisions
, they feel fuzzy in
next
stages of plan and
therefore
will encounter several obstacles that they
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have to
take too much
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time
to solve.
Hence
, it is long
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time
to finish
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despite of
being
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fast
at the beginning.

On the other hand
, right
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decisions
can be
still
made
quickly
by those who acquire enormous
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enough
amount of experience, knowledge and
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skill
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because
it
is acknowledged
that they could learn to develop their habit of reasoned decision-making.
Accordingly
, to reach a
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fast
and correct
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decision
seems to be possible for them.

All in all, it is deep analysis and proper
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time
that
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helps
to find out right
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decisions
,
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so
making
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decisions
quickly
can never be more effective.
Also
, be careful whenever deciding anything or unfortunate results may occur.

IELTS essay The decisions that people make quickly are always wrong.

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5 paragraphs
290 words
6.0
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