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The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime.To what extent do you agree?

The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. v. 4
It is commonly believed that heinous crimes done to people should be punished with a death penalty. A death penalty is said to be given to those whose crimes cannot be forgiven by anybody but I absolutely disagree that statement because death penalty should be a given for heinous crimes during this time and age. In my opinion death penalty should be considered in case of any serious crime because our law system is flawed and corrupted, To rectify this matter rather than sending criminals to prison for a period of time we as a society should appeal to the government to keep death penalty the only option for the crimes these criminals have committed. To conclude death penalty should be implemented for the good everyone because people will come to understand that any heinous crimes done by an individual or group states that they are willing to forfeit their lives in order for the crime committed.
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believed that heinous
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crimes
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people
should
be punished
with a death
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penalty
. A death
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penalty
is said
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death
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penalty
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given
for heinous
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crimes
during this time and age.

In my opinion death
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penalty
should
be considered
in case of any serious
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crime
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because
our law system
is flawed
and corrupted, To rectify this matter
rather
than sending criminals to prison for a period of time we as a society should appeal to the
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government
to
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keep
death
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penalty
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only
option for the
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crimes
these criminals have committed.

To conclude
death
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should
be implemented
for the
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good
everyone
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people
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come
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lives
in order for the
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crime
committed.
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IELTS essay The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
157 words
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