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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? ojaK
In this ultra-modern era, some group of citizen believe that the study of history is wastage of time rather than modern subject like science and technology. While, I am not agree with is sentence and not believe that history has no meaning in our life. Section of people opine that history is totally unrelated subject in today’s life, this type of opinion without fact because history has their own important in everyone life, it is affect one or other way and play essential role in present society. Firstly, we can know about our existence with history subject also we could learn the fact and history such as, how we got freedom? Who was the real hero behind this? Secondly, we could familiar with root of fact behind today’s festival and celebration, for example, we can learn that victory of lord Rama over Ravan is the main reason behind celebration of festival Diwali. Finally, Scientist also relate and take clue from the history for their modern research. On the other hand group of common people favour that demandable subject is more relevant in this modern world because, these subject is essential part of modern science. Also highly use full to build successful carrier. Latest technology and scientific research all are depended on the subject like mathematics and science. In conclusion, Science and technological subjects are more relevant in to innovation and research, while I personally believe that history is the essential part of the modern life and backbone in latest innovation.
In this ultra-modern era,
some
group of citizen believe that the study of
history
is wastage of time
rather
than
modern
subject
like science and technology. While, I am not
agree
with is sentence and not believe that
history
has no meaning in our life.

Section of
people
opine that
history
is
totally
unrelated
subject
in
today
’s life, this type of opinion without fact
because
history
has their
own
important
in everyone life, it is affect one or other way and play essential role in present society.
Firstly
, we can know about our existence with
history
subject
also
we could learn the fact and
history
such as, how we
got
freedom? Who was the real hero behind this?
Secondly
, we
could familiar
with root of fact behind
today
’s festival and celebration,
for example
, we can learn that victory of lord Rama over
Ravan
is the main reason behind celebration of festival Diwali.
Finally
, Scientist
also
relate and take clue from the
history
for their
modern
research.

On the other hand
group of common
people
favour
that demandable
subject
is more relevant in this
modern
world
because
, these
subject
is essential part of
modern
science.
Also
highly
use
full to build successful carrier.
Latest
technology and scientific research all
are depended
on the
subject
like mathematics and science.

In conclusion
, Science and technological
subjects
are more relevant in to innovation and research, while I
personally
believe that
history
is the essential part of the
modern
life and backbone in
latest
innovation.
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IELTS essay The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

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250 words
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