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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

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The issues from smoking has learnt long time ago, but most of individuals have not ceases such practice. This essay firstly will suggest that the biggest problem caused by this phenomen is the increase of diseases and then submit propaganda of healthy way of life as the most viable solution. The foremost challenge of smocking is diseas of lungs. This is because of daily consumption of cigerettes. As we know any fume is harmful for people, but when they smoke that fume strikes smokers lungs and settles there. As a result, smoked person may ill from different diseases like tuberculosis, bronchitis and others. For example, scientists have revealed that smokers suffer from tuberculosis at 3 times oftener than non-smokers. A possible solution to solve this problem is providing many different sport events. The reason for this that environment affects a person. If organizators interest people in the benefits of such sports activities, they will be passionate about the activity in the future. For instance, in Germany due to propaganda of healthy living way, smoking among young generation deacreased by 70 percent. To conclude, all above written, it cab be seen that the main issue of smoking is existing of diseases and producing activities of healthy way of life as the one of reducing variety.
The issues from smoking
has
learnt
long time ago,
but
most of individuals
have not ceases such practice. This essay
firstly
will suggest that the biggest problem caused by this
phenomen
is the increase of diseases and then submit propaganda of healthy way of life as the most viable solution.

The foremost challenge of smocking is
diseas
of lungs. This is
because
of daily consumption of
cigerettes
. As we know any fume is harmful for
people
,
but
when they smoke that fume strikes smokers lungs and settles there.
As a result
, smoked person may ill from
different
diseases like tuberculosis, bronchitis
and others
.
For example
, scientists have revealed that smokers suffer from tuberculosis at 3 times oftener than non-smokers.

A possible solution to solve this problem is providing
many
different
sport
events
. The reason for this that environment affects a person. If
organizators
interest
people
in the benefits of such sports activities, they will be passionate about the activity in the future.
For instance
, in Germany due to propaganda of healthy living way, smoking among young generation
deacreased
by 70 percent.

To conclude
, all above written, it
cab
be
seen
that the main issue of smoking is existing of diseases and producing activities of healthy way of life as the one of reducing variety.
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IELTS essay The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
214 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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