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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society? OV6bG
Is smoking harmful to humans? It's no doubt that smoking is a long term suicide. There is a lot of causes of smoking. To name a few, ciggerate is addictive because of nicotine, one of the main cause is the addiction of nicotine. Also, smoking can cause lung cancer, there is a theroy indicates that smoking a ciggerate can reduce a person's life for 10 hours. Besides, smoking can also increse the risk of a person suffering from mutiple heart diseases including high blood pressure. The chance of have heart attack for a regular smoker is also 30% higher than a non-smoker. By what measures we can reduce smoking in the society? The first method is to increase tax on ciggerates, it can help light smokers to quit smoking in order to avoid paying the increasing price of ciggerates. However, heavy smokers may not be forced to quit as their addiction of ciggerate are serious that even increasing the price of ciggerates can't help them to get rid of smoking. For these heavy smokers, it's suggested that medical treaments should be given, in order to help them to stop smoking. Nicotine subsituses such as nicotine stickers can be used for them to stop relying on tobacco. They may be able to get rid of nicotine addiction right away, but they can stop the habbit of ciggerate usage first. Then by reducing the usage of nicotine subsituses, they will finally quit smoking. Preventing non-smokers from smoking is also as important as helping smokers quit smoking. In the past, a massive numbers of people went smoking beacuse of its cool image that promoted by the ciggerate manufacters, especially in the teen culture. And with the lack of education, people actually though that smoking was not only cool, it was also good for health. So, to prevent people from smoking, the government should provide a harmful image of smoking and put more resources in teaching the cause of smoking especially among teenagers.
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harmful to humans? It's no doubt that
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smoking
is a long term suicide. There is
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causes
of
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smoking
. To name a few,
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ciggerate
is addictive
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because
of nicotine, one of the main
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cause
is the addiction of nicotine.
Also
,
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smoking
can
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cause
lung cancer, there is a
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theroy
indicates that
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smoking
a
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ciggerate
can
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reduce
a person's life for 10 hours.
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,
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smoking
can
also
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increse
the
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risk
of a person suffering from
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mutiple
heart diseases including high blood pressure. The chance of have heart attack for a regular smoker is
also
30% higher than a non-smoker.

By what measures we can
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reduce
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smoking
in the society? The
first
method is to increase tax on
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ciggerates
, it can
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help
light smokers to
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quit
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smoking
in order to avoid paying the increasing price of
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ciggerates
.
However
, heavy smokers may not
be forced
to
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quit
as their addiction of
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ciggerate
are serious that even increasing the price of
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ciggerates
can't
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help
them to
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get
rid of smoking.

For these heavy smokers, it's suggested that medical
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treaments
should be
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given
, in order to
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help
them to
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stop
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smoking
. Nicotine
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subsituses
such as nicotine stickers can be
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used
for them to
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stop
relying on tobacco. They may be able to
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get
rid of nicotine addiction right away,
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but
they can
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stop
the
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habbit
of
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ciggerate
usage
first
. Then by reducing the usage of nicotine
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subsituses
, they will
finally
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quit
smoking.

Preventing non-smokers from
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smoking
is
also
as
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important
as helping smokers
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quit
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smoking
. In the past, a massive
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numbers
of
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people
went
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smoking
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beacuse
of its cool image that promoted by the
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ciggerate
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manufacters
,
especially
in the teen culture. And with the lack of education,
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people
actually though that
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smoking
was not
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only
cool, it was
also
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good
for health.
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prevent
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people
from
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smoking
, the
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government
should provide a harmful image of
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smoking
and put more resources in teaching the
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cause
of
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smoking
especially
among
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teenagers
.
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IELTS essay The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
329 words
5.5
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