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In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.

In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions. LrL8n
As cities continue to grow, especially in developing countries, the percentage of transportation means is escalating day by day. Unfortunately, traffic problems invariably ensue. This essay will present these problems and some solutions. One of the major causes of traffic congestion is simply a lack of space. Because most of the streets are narrow, which were constructed in the last few decades, used to contain mainly bicycles, motorbikes, and a few. cars, it has no room for new roads to handle the rapid growth of transport means. Another factor of a traffic jam is the rising wealth of city dwellers. Purchasing a car seems to be a popular way to show off one’s prosperity. Up to now, cars have begun to swallow the space that just used to accommodate many smaller forms of transportation. In order to solve this problem, measures should be taken to reduce private car ownership. If someone wants to take up so much extra space every day, they should be forced to pay an extra tax that can be used to improve transport infrastructure. In addition, more and better public transportation is the best option. Once a city reaches a certain size, extra roads are not a solution. Admittedly, some people dislike using public transport, but it must be seen as a price for living in a developing city. In conclusion, while economic growth and population increase have led to massive matters with traffic, some practical solutions can be taken to improve the situation.
As cities continue to grow,
especially
in
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developing countries
, the percentage of transportation means is escalating day by day. Unfortunately,
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traffic
problems
invariably
ensue. This essay will present these problems and
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some
solutions.

One of the major causes of
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traffic
congestion is
simply
a lack of space.
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Because
most of the streets are narrow, which
were constructed
in the last few decades,
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used
to contain
mainly
bicycles, motorbikes, and a few.
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cars
, it has no room for new roads to handle the rapid growth of transport means. Another factor of a
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traffic
jam is the rising wealth of city dwellers. Purchasing a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
car
seems to be a popular way to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
off one’s prosperity. Up to
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now
,
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cars
have begun to swallow the space that
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just
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used
to accommodate
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many
smaller forms of transportation.

In order to solve this problem, measures should
be taken
to
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reduce
private
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car
ownership. If someone wants to take up
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so
much extra space every day, they should
be forced
to pay an extra tax that can be
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used
to
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improve
transport infrastructure.
In addition
, more and better public transportation is the best option. Once a city reaches a certain size, extra roads are not a solution.
Admittedly
,
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some
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people
dislike using public transport,
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but
it
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must
be
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seen
as a price for living in a developing city.

In conclusion
, while economic growth and population increase have led to massive matters with
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traffic
,
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some
practical solutions can
be taken
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the situation.

IELTS essay In most parts of the world, the volume of traffic is growing at an alarming rate. In the form of an assignment, discuss the main traffic problems in your country, their causes and possible solutions.

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