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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer ljXVQ
No one can deny that there are positive and negative aspects of learning materials. If I were forced to choose, I would agree with this statement which applies that reading paper is better than electronic devices to gain information. It's my firm belief that hard-based materials are beneficial and essential for several reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs. First, reading paper materials are comfortable to the eyes. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. you see, when I was in a secondary stage, at the beginning of the semester, our teacher told us that there are two sources the software one and the other is the hard books, and we have to choose from one of them to start studying. At first, I chose the electronic ones as I believed that they are easier to use, but unfortunately, I couldn't endure this way of learning because my eye began to get stressed and most of the time its colour converted to red, so at the end of the semester I changed my opinion and used the paper materials. As a result, my eye began to return to its normal state and I became more comfortable with these sources. For this reason, I admit that reading paper is better resources relevant to our comfort. Secondly, paper- based materials are more accurate and precise than an electronic one. drawing from my own experience, when I was in grade ten, I used to use the internet and electronic resources to approach my learning concepts and prepare for presentations. one day, the teacher asked me to prepare for a presentation related to a biology concept, the next day, while I was performing my presentation, the teacher stopped me and correct information I have been just told, and she asked from where I got this idea, and after she knew that is from an encyclopedia found on the internet. She advised all of us not to use the internet for learning such details like that and it's better to use the based and scientific hard books. It's certainly clear to see why I prefer reading paper than technological devices. In light of the mentioned- reasons, I believe that reading based materials are more guaranteed and include accurate information as it will be a comfortable source for your eye and brain.
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and
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aspects of
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. If I
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to choose, I would
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agree
with this statement which applies that
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paper is better than
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devices to gain information. It's my firm belief that
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hard
-based
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materials
are beneficial and essential for several reasons, and I will develop these
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ideas
in the subsequent paragraphs.

First
,
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reading
paper
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materials
are comfortable to the
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eyes
. I
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admit that my opinion on this matter has been
profoundly
influenced by my personal experience.
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you
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, when I was in a secondary stage, at the beginning of the semester, our teacher
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told
us that there are two sources the software one and the other is the
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hard
books, and we
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have to
choose from one of them to
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start
studying. At
first
, I chose the
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ones as I believed that they are easier to
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,
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unfortunately, I couldn't endure this way of
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because
my
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began to
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and most of the time its
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at the
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end
of the semester I
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changed
my opinion and
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used
the paper
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materials
.
As a result
, my
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began to return to its normal state and I became more comfortable with these sources.
For this reason
, I admit that
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reading
paper is better resources relevant to our comfort.

Secondly
, paper- based
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are more accurate and precise than an
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electronic
one.
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drawing
from my
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own
experience, when I was in grade ten, I
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to
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use
the internet and
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electronic
resources to approach my
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learning
concepts and prepare for presentations.
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one
day, the teacher asked me to prepare for a presentation related to a biology concept, the
next
day, while I was performing my presentation, the teacher
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me and correct information I have been
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, and she asked from where I
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this
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, and after she knew
that is
from an encyclopedia found on the internet. She advised all of us not to
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use
the internet for
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learning
such
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like that and it's better to
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the based and scientific
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hard
books. It's
certainly
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clear
to
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why I prefer
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paper
than technological devices.

In light of the mentioned- reasons, I believe that
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reading
based
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materials
are more guaranteed and include accurate information as it will be a comfortable source for your
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eye
and brain.

IELTS essay Reading paper materials is better than watching electronic devices to gain information. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
401 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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