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In some companies today applicants are rejected due to old age. Is it a positive or negative development

In some companies today applicants are rejected due to old age. Is it a positive or negative development AjJ8X
There is no doubt that many organisations hire employees till specific age period. In my opinion, it is a negative trend as companies can lose valuable experience employee, but I also believe it is a positive development to a certain extent as it gives a golden opportunity to newcomers. On the one hand, I agree rejection of workers due to old age is a negative trend to some extent. To elucidate, having considerable knowledge and experience of many years being a failure, old age have clear sight how to lead the company’s vision and mission, and also they are versatile in the expansion of an organization. Hence, if any experienced worker has to leave the company because of age limitation, it is inclined that company might loose his valuable candidate and suffer a huge loss. For example, a recent report by the Times of India revealed that the law has been enacted by the Indian Government that no person should be working more than 55 years in any organization, this resulted in many MNCs’ loosed well-experienced and qualified employees from their organization and occurred 2-5% of loss in that financial year. On the other hand, many companies accepted particular age on hiring candidates which I think is a positive development to a certain extent as it enables millennial to become a salary earner. To elaborate, having passed out from the renowned universities, many youngsters are in seek of getting good jobs, and they would be able to get better job prospects only when old age candidate were rejected from the companies, and this allows them to achieve valuable experience and progress in their career path. This results in becoming independent. For example, a recent report by Economic Times reported that Singapore was the first country to give priority to newcomers and this resulted in reducing 10% of unemployment of the country particular that year. In conclusion, although I agree that rejecting old employee due to age limit is a negative trend because companies lose valuable candidate, I also think it is a positive trend to a certain extent as it allows a new generation to experience new job prospects and become independent.
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till specific
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age
period. In my opinion, it is a
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negative
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trend
as
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companies
can lose
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valuable
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experience
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employee
,
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believe it is a
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positive
development to a certain
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as it gives a golden opportunity to newcomers.

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agree
rejection of workers due to
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age
is a
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negative
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to
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extent
. To elucidate, having considerable knowledge and
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experience
of
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years being a failure,
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old
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age
have
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clear
sight how to lead the
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company’s
vision and mission, and
also
they are versatile in the expansion of an
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organization
.
Hence
, if any experienced worker
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limitation, it
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loose
his
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valuable
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candidate
and suffer a huge loss.
For example
, a recent report by
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the Times of India
revealed that the law has
been enacted
by the Indian
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Government
that no person should be working more than 55 years in any
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organization
, this resulted in
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MNCs
’ loosed well-experienced and qualified
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employees
from their
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organization
and occurred 2-5% of loss in that financial year.

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,
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on hiring
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is a
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development to a certain
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as it enables millennial to become a salary earner. To elaborate, having passed out from the renowned universities,
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many
youngsters are in seek of getting
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good
jobs, and they would be able to
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get
better job prospects
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when
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old
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age
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were rejected
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companies
, and this
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allows
them to achieve
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valuable
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experience
and progress in their career path. This results in becoming independent.
For example
, a recent report by Economic Times reported that Singapore was the
first
country to give priority to newcomers and this resulted in reducing 10% of unemployment of the country particular that year.

In conclusion
, although I
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employee
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age
limit is a
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negative
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trend
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, I
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as it
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allows
a new generation to
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experience
new job prospects and become independent.
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IELTS essay In some companies today applicants are rejected due to old age. Is it a positive or negative development

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