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The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over

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The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over, there ia lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world. Overall, There 7 stages to produce the product from the design to the customers for the last stage is recycling the production. life circle for production for the environment No good and atmosphere will be pollutant. In the Stage 1 design and planning for the project. Second stage goes to the industry to consumption the material and energy resources the gas goes up and defctive the environment, third it’s production than trasmittied to the store of shop. fourth stage parking the product and distribution. stage five sale the production and drop to there house. Sixth stage use by the saler man then disposal from the productionafter long time use. stage seven recycling the product and reuse. This is a life cycle for the production.
The cycle illustrates
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preceses
of environmental issues by a
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product
over, there
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ia
lot of steps harmful to the environment of the country or world.

Overall
, There 7
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stages
to produce the
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product
from the design to the customers for the last
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stage
is recycling the
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production
.
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life
circle for
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production
for the
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environment


No
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good
and atmosphere will be pollutant.

In the
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Stage
1 design and planning for the project. Second
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stage
goes to the industry to consumption the material and energy resources the gas goes up and
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defctive
the environment, third it’s
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production
than
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trasmittied
to the store of shop.
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fourth
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stage
parking the
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product
and distribution.
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stage
five sale the
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production
and drop to
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there
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house
. Sixth
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stage
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use
by the
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saler
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man
then disposal from the
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productionafter
long time
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use
.
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stage
seven recycling the
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product
and reuse. This is a life cycle for the
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production
.

IELTS essay The cycle illustrates preceses of environmental issues by a product over

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  American English
4 paragraphs
149 words
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