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Difference between my generation and my parents’'s generation.

Difference between my generation and my parents’'s generation. 0EN2O
First of all technology. My generation is more familiar with them, in the past as well as we know there were only some phones and not everyone used to have it, like only people who can afford it. I am helping my parents with how to use some apps. We spend most of our time on social media, we are doing homework and other work in on our phones or laptops and chatting is our way of communication. In the past you must send a letter, then the letter will be delivered and then you are going to wait for the respond response and all this process is going to take pretty much of time. But nowadays we can easily send and get messages from all over the world. And I would like to talk about education. In my generation, every person has at least a bachelor’s degree, and we all are trying to work harder and harder daily, because we know that nowadays are the days of educated people. But in the past, only rich people had the opportunity of an education. And I want to add that nowadays my generation is having online lessons at school or at the course because of a pandemic or sometimes our teachers want to have extra lessons before an exam or a test. And there are also a lot of opinions about races, orientations. Our generation is more loyal and more open about these things. Old The old generation does not think that it is good especially about orientations. I mean in our generation not everyone thinks that it should be allowed, but in the past, people could hit you because of who you are and who you love So there were and there are new inventions, life will not stop and after your death, everything is going to change and just improve. Overall there are so much many of changes between the two two-generation. And much of them are in a good way, so let’s see what is going to happen in the next generation.
First of all
technology. My generation is more familiar with them, in the
past
as well
as we know there were
only
some
phones and not everyone
used
to have it, like
only
people
who can afford it. I am helping my parents with how to
use
some
apps. We spend most of our time on social media, we are doing homework and other work in on our phones or laptops and chatting is our way of communication. In the
past
you
must
send
a letter, then the letter will
be delivered
and then you are going to wait for the
respond
response and all this process is going to take pretty much of time.
But
nowadays we can
easily
send
and
get
messages from all over the world.

And I would like to talk about education. In my generation, every person has at least a bachelor’s degree, and we all are trying to work harder and harder daily,
because
we know that nowadays are the days of educated
people
.
But
in the
past
,
only
rich
people
had the opportunity of an education. And I want to
add
that nowadays my generation is having online lessons at school or at the course
because
of a pandemic or
sometimes
our teachers want to have extra lessons
before
an exam or a
test
.

And there are
also
a lot of
opinions about races, orientations. Our generation is more loyal and more open about these things.
Old
The
old
generation does not
think
that it is
good
especially
about orientations. I mean in our generation not everyone
thinks
that it should be
allowed
,
but
in the
past
,
people
could hit you
because
of who you are and who you
love


So
there were and there are new inventions, life will not
stop
and after your death, everything is going to
change
and
just
improve
.
Overall
there are
so
much
many
of
changes
between the two two-generation. And much of them are in a
good
way,
so
let
’s
see
what is going to happen in the
next
generation.
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IELTS essay Difference between my generation and my parents’'s generation.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
344 words
5.5
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