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The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year. Ojnd
It can be seen that there is an upward phenomenon in the education system nowadays. Students are assessed through the school year by taking a variety of assignments, projects, ect rather than sitting for examinations. In my opinion, this significant change can have a great deal of positive effects. First of all, students may gain a number of benefits by having continuous assessment by both teachers and their peers. It is essential for them to be aware of their strengths and weaknesses during the semester so that a range of improvements can be made in the future. Assessment is considered as a tool for learning to find out what students have already known, their confusions, preconceptions or gaps they might have. As a result, students can reflect their studies, adjust new strategies and set new goals which are appropriate to their abilities and purposes. For instance, after an enormous project including preparation, presentation, summary, ect, students will receive feedback and comments from their teachers and classmates and then review themselves to recognize mistakes and attempt to do better next time. Furthermore, regarding the advantages of parents, it is accessible for them to keep track of their children’s study progress and achievements. Not only do students know but their parents also observe and engage in the process of learning carefully and seriously. Results and evaluation of constant assessment will be sent to parents so that they can review it with the kids instantly. Hence, parents can assist teachers to guide and monitor students’ progress toward them at home whenever they have distraction during the session. To illustrate, students might be lazy and discouraged while reflecting their works so it is vital for parents to remind and motivate them in order to stick to the plans. In conclusion, continuous assessment is an effective and realistic method for learning involving many optimistic outcomes. This system should be applied more spreadly worldwide so that every kid can receive a good education.
It can be
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seen
that there is an upward phenomenon in the education system nowadays.
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Students
are assessed
through the school year by taking a variety of assignments, projects,
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ect
rather
than sitting for examinations. In my opinion, this significant
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change
can have a great deal of
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positive
effects.

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First of all
,
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students
may gain a number of benefits by having continuous
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assessment
by both teachers and their peers. It is essential for them to be aware of their strengths and weaknesses during the semester
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so
that a range of improvements can
be made
in the future.
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Assessment
is considered
as a tool for learning to find out what
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students
have already known, their confusions, preconceptions or gaps they might have.
As a result
,
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students
can reflect their studies, adjust new strategies and set new goals which are appropriate to their abilities and purposes.
For instance
, after an enormous project including preparation, presentation, summary,
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ect
,
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students
will receive feedback and comments from their teachers and classmates and then review themselves to recognize mistakes and attempt to do better
next
time.

Furthermore
, regarding the advantages of
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parents
, it is accessible for them to
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keep
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track
of their children’s study progress and achievements. Not
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only
do
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students
know
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but
their
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parents
also
observe and engage in the process of learning
carefully
and
seriously
. Results and evaluation of constant
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assessment
will be
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sent
to
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parents
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so
that they can review it with the kids
instantly
.
Hence
,
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parents
can assist teachers to guide and monitor
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students’
progress toward them at home whenever they have distraction during the session. To illustrate,
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students
might be lazy and discouraged while reflecting their works
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so
it is vital for
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parents
to remind and motivate them in order to stick to the plans.

In conclusion
, continuous
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assessment
is an effective and realistic method for learning
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involving
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many
optimistic outcomes. This system should
be applied
more
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spreadly
worldwide
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so
that every kid can receive a
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good
education.
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IELTS essay The current trend in education is to move away from traditional exams and instead have continuous assessment over the school year.

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4 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
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