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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. AVQN

“It is difficult to find the main arguments in this answer. There are long, formulaic introductions, not many ideas that deal with the actual issues and the writer's point of view is not consistent. The prompt is copied directly three times in the response and the remainder is underlength at 1 fit. words, so marks are lost for this. The response is organised into sections, but the relationship between ideas is not always clear and the linking expressions are sometimes inaccurate, as in the opening paragraph, or used in a mechanical way, as in the second paragraph. The dependence on formulaic language and the input material indicates a limited range of vocabulary and there is a lot of repetition and inaccuracy. A range of structures is attempted, but control is weak. Errors in grammar and punctuation are frequent and cause problems for the reader.

“It is difficult to find the main arguments in this answer. There are long, formulaic introductions, not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 that deal with the actual issues and the writer's point of view is not consistent. The prompt is copied
directly
 three times in the response and the remainder is Possible spelling mistake found.under length
underlength
 at 1 fit. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWords
words
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 marks are lost
 for this.

The response is Possible spelling mistake. 'organised' is British English.organized
organised
 into sections, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the relationship between This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtsconceptsnotions
ideas
 is not always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 and the linking expressions are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 inaccurate, as in the opening paragraph, or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
Consider replacing "in a mechanical way" with the adverb for "mechanical"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a mechanical way
, as in the second paragraph.

The dependence on formulaic language and the input material indicates a limited range of vocabulary and there is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 repetition and inaccuracy. A range of structures is attempted
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 control is weak. Errors in grammar and punctuation are frequent and cause problems for the reader. 