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The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives. What are those aspects and how have they changed?

The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives. What are those aspects and how have they changed? 9NJ0
Major countries have suffered alot due to the Coronavirus. The effects of it on human beigns for longer period of time. This essay states for the positive side of Coronovirus pandemic. Firstly, the coronavirus pandemic disrupted lives of many people changed in their professional life and the social life. If person works based on IT field, then they can work From home. By using modern newly invented applications like the Zoom, the Skype and many more applications for their conversation and meetings. So it is better for the company like the employees will not use company’s primises and even they will not use transportation to reach at office so it is better for the environment because it will not releases corbon in the air. Apart from it, the lives of small vanders, small scale businesses and merchants, sales persons suffer due to the pandemic situations of Coronavirus. Moreover, these people started earning from their online businesses like vegetables and fruits vader started their own application like the Fresh bag to sell vegetables and fruits. Secondly, the coronavirus pandemic affected social gathering in many ways. Government restricted gathering of many people at time. Even imposed many rules to follow like checking of temprature before entering, wear a mask, use sanitizing tunnel which is put up before entering in to the function. Moreover, there will not be wasted of money in social gathering as there will be only some relatives not many. So this is good change. Consequetly, students are suffering who are at pre -primary level, who do not know about school premises and physical activities. They need to study virtually due to coronovirus pandemic situation. Childrens lack of traditional learning method. In conclusion, There are many ways to over come Coronavirus pandemic but it is more about positive changes seen in people and environment also. So, it is recommended to follow rules and regulations of government, which is better for mankind to overcome future calamities.
Major countries have suffered
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due to the Coronavirus. The effects of it on human
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beigns
for longer period of time. This essay states for the
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positive
side of
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Coronovirus
pandemic.

Firstly
, the coronavirus pandemic disrupted
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lives
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people
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changed
in their professional life and the social life. If person works based on IT field, then they can work From home. By using modern
newly
invented applications like the Zoom, the Skype and
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many
more applications for their conversation and meetings.
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it is better for the
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company
like the employees will not
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use
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and even they will not
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use
transportation to reach at office
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so
it is better for the environment
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because
it will not
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corbon
in the air. Apart from it, the
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of
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small
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vanders
,
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scale businesses and merchants, sales persons suffer due to the pandemic situations of Coronavirus.
Moreover
, these
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people
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started
earning from their online businesses like vegetables and fruits
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vader
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their
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application like the Fresh bag to sell vegetables and fruits.

Secondly
, the coronavirus pandemic
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affected
social gathering in
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many
ways.
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Government
restricted gathering of
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many
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people
at time. Even imposed
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many
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rules
to follow like checking of
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temprature
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before
entering, wear a mask,
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sanitizing tunnel which
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before
entering in to the function.
Moreover
, there will not
be wasted
of money in social gathering as there will be
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relatives not
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, students are suffering who are at
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pre
-primary level, who do not know about school premises and physical activities. They need to study
virtually
due to
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coronovirus
pandemic situation.
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Childrens lack
of traditional learning method.

In conclusion
, There are
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come
Coronavirus pandemic
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positive
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changes
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people
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So
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is recommended
to follow
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government
, which is better for mankind to overcome future calamities.
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IELTS essay The coronavirus pandemic has disrupted our lives and forever changed many aspects of our lives. What are those aspects and how have they changed?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
325 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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