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The process below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below.

The process below shows how drinking water is made using solar power. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information given below. gL7D

The given process illustrates how underground water is pumped out and made fit for drinking by using energy from the sun. It can be seen that mainly four steps are involved in the process. In the first step, heat from the sun is stored using solar panels. Then this is converted to electricity. This electricity is then used in a pump which pumps out underground water. After this step, the pumped out water is made to pass through a water filter and then stored in a big water tank, which is placed on a wooden platform. There is an outlet pipe on the lower end of this water tank which has a tap attached to it from which potable water can be taken out in a movable container as and when needed. Overall, it can be seen that solar energy, which is a renewable energy can be used very effectively to pump out water from below the ground and then filter it to convert it into safe water fit for drinking.

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given
 process illustrates how underground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is pumped
 out and made fit for drinking by using energy from the sun. It can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that mainly
 four steps are involved
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the
 process.

In the first
 step, heat from the sun is stored
 using solar panels. Then this is converted
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electricity
. This electricity is then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in a pump which pumps out underground You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
. After this step, the pumped out You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
is made
 to pass through a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 filter and then stored in a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:hugeenormousgiganticvast
big
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water
 tank, which is placed
 on a wooden platform. There is an outlet pipe on Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthe.the!the?the:the,the;
the


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lower
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end
 of this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 tank which has a tap attached to it from which potable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 can be taken
 out in a movable container as and when needed.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that solar energy, which is a renewable energy can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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very
effectively
 to pump out You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 from below the ground and then filter it to convert it into safe You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdrinkrain
water
 fit for drinking. 