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the diffenrences of australia and vietnam

the diffenrences of australia and vietnam 5LVRm
Australia is a place where many Vietnamese want to visit and have the opportunities to explore the country of Kangaroos. Both countries have their own customs as well as living environment. Apart from the difference in language, the two countries also have different eating styles. Usually, there are three indispensable things in Vietnamese meals such as chopsticks, bowls of white rice and fish sauces. Besides, Australians seem to often use plates and forks to eat. Another striking discrepancy between the two nations is population. With the figure of 93 million people, Vietnam’s population approximately quadruple Australia's, even so, the land area of Australia is more than 20 times the extent of the country of the palm-leaf conical hats.
Australia is a place where
many
Vietnamese want to visit and have the opportunities to explore the
country
of Kangaroos. Both
countries
have their
own
customs
as well as
living environment. Apart from the difference in language, the two
countries
also
have
different
eating styles.
Usually
, there are three indispensable things in Vietnamese meals such as chopsticks, bowls of white rice and fish sauces.
Besides
, Australians seem to
often
use
plates and forks to eat. Another striking discrepancy between the two nations is population. With the figure of 93 million
people
, Vietnam’s population approximately quadruple Australia's, even
so
, the land area of Australia is more than 20 times the extent of the
country
of the palm-leaf conical hats.
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IELTS essay the diffenrences of australia and vietnam

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