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The commercial agents in Vietnam legislation

The commercial agents in Vietnam legislation aVnDw
In Vietnam, a commercial agency is one of the commercial intermediary activities. In a centrally planned economy, commercial intermediary activities in Vietnam mainly existed in the international economic field. But in a multi-sectoral market economy, commercial intermediary activities, including the commercial agents had the chance to appear domestic and was legislated. Nowadays, commercial agents are playing an essential role. First is the definition of commercial agency, according to Article 166 of the Commercial Law 2005, commercial agency means a commercial activity whereby the principal and the agent agree that the agent, in its own name, sells or purchases goods for the principal or provides services of the principal to customers for remuneration. Article 169 of the Commercial Law 2005 illustrates forms of commercial agents: Off-take agency, exclusive agency, general goods sale or purchase or service provision agency, other forms of agency. For example, General Agent DAI-ICHI Hoang Mai, An An mattress agent, Exclusive agent in Quang Ninh - Thanh Hoa Stone Joint Stock Company, etc. Next, the multi-sectoral market economy has made the commercial agents quite popular in Vietnam. That is the reason why many people wonder about the procedure to establish a commercial agent. The first procedure is that the agent must choose the field of commercial activities. Agents need to be careful in this part because it will determine the selection of agents. An agent may enter into contracts with different principals but all of these principals can only work in the same field. For example, a paint agent can have many contracts with many paint companies such as Son Dong Tam, Son Dukan, Son Dulux, etc to diversify and enrich their products, but it cannot selling bricks, corrugated iron, etc. In the second procedure, the agent must be a trader and have a business registration. According to Clause 11 Article 3 of the Commercial Law 2005, commercial activities, including commercial agents, must be performed by traders. It means that individuals and organisations who want to become agents must administer commercial activities independently and regularly and then register business registration. If an individual or organisation does not have commercial activities before, it must determine the appropriate business type and get a business registration paper. As a final procedure, the agent and the principal must sign in a commercial agency contract. The agency contract must be in writing or another form with legal efficacy equivalent (telegraph, telex, fax, etc). The agreement should include some aspects such as the agency's goods or services, remuneration, contract duration, rights and obligations, compensation, etc. Another part, the commercial agents has an important role, especially in trade globalisation. Firstly, commercial agents bring productivity for traders in organising, distributing and consuming goods and services domestic and abroad. Principals usually are manufacturers, can have more opportunities to focus on producing high efficient products. The agent will bring them to customers in a professional manner. Secondly, the convenient distribution by commercial agents raises the development of the economy. In particular, it is recognised as a profitable business method for consumers with easy access to products and insurance about product quality and cost. The fourth part mentions comparing the regulations of commercial agents between Vietnam regulation and United Kingdom regulation. Firstly, the parties are still principals and agents, in which the agent plays an intermediary role in commercial activities. The agent is on behalf of the principals to trade products or services. Moreover, both Vietnam and the UK is eliminating some individuals and organisations that are not authorised to be agents. The rights and obligations of the parties are regulated by law. However, the regulations of the UK are mentioned more specific than in Vietnam. Because they are not only included in a provision but also appear in most relevant provisions. Other parts such as remuneration, time limit, termination, etc also mention by both countries but they are legislated in more detail in the UK regulation. In addition, the commercial agents in Vietnam are regulated in Commercial Law and also in many relevant legal documents. Do it is not as specific as the UK regulation which is The Commercial Agents (Council Directive) Regulation 1993. Finally, Vietnam law has the forms of commercial agents, but it does not appear in the UK's law and conversely, The UK regulation includes some provisions which Vietnam regulation does not such as apportionment of commission between new and previous commercial agents, etc. In summary, commercial agents are necessary for the advancement of the economy, especially in the period of world integration. So that knowledge about the commercial agents is meaningful for many activities.
In Vietnam, a
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commercial
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agency
is one of the
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commercial
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intermediary
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activities
. In a
centrally
planned
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economy
,
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commercial
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intermediary
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activities
in Vietnam
mainly
existed in the international economic field.
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But
in a multi-sectoral market
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economy
,
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commercial
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intermediary
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activities
, including the
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commercial
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agents
had the chance to appear domestic and
was legislated
. Nowadays,
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commercial
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agents
are playing an essential role.

First
is the definition of
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commercial
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agency
, according to Article 166 of the
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Commercial
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Law
2005,
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commercial
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agency
means a
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commercial
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activity
whereby the
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principal
and the
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agent
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agree
that the
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agent
, in its
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own
name, sells or
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purchases
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goods
for the
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principal
or provides
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services
of the
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principal
to customers for remuneration.

Article 169 of the
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Commercial
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Law
2005 illustrates
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forms
of
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commercial
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agents
: Off-take
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agency
, exclusive
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agency
, general
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goods
sale or
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purchase
or
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service
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provision
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agency
, other
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forms
of
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agency
.
For example
, General
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Agent
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DAI-ICHI
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Hoang
Mai,
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An An
mattress
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agent
, Exclusive
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agent
in
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Quang
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Ninh
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-
Thanh
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Hoa
Stone Joint Stock
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Company
, etc.

Next
, the multi-sectoral market
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economy
has made the
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commercial
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agents
quite popular in Vietnam.
That is
the reason why
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many
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people
wonder about the
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procedure
to establish a
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commercial
agent.

The
first
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procedure
is that the
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agent
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must
choose the field of
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commercial
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activities
.
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Agents
need to be careful in this
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part
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because
it will determine the selection of
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agents
. An
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agent
may enter into
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contracts
with
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different
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principals
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but
all of these
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principals
can
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only
work in the same field.
For example
, a paint
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agent
can have
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many
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contracts
with
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many
paint
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companies
such as Son Dong Tam, Son
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Dukan
, Son
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Dulux
, etc to diversify and enrich their
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products
,
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but
it cannot
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selling
bricks, corrugated iron, etc.

In the second
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procedure
, the
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agent
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must
be a trader and have a
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business
registration. According to Clause 11 Article 3 of the
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Commercial
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Law
2005,
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commercial
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activities
, including
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commercial
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agents
,
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must
be performed
by traders. It means that individuals and
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organisations
who want to become
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agents
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must
administer
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commercial
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activities
independently
and
regularly
and then register
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business
registration. If an individual or
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organisation
does not have
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commercial
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activities
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before
, it
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must
determine the appropriate
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business
type and
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get
a
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business
registration paper.

As a final
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procedure
, the
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agent
and the
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principal
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must
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sign
in a
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commercial
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agency
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contract
. The
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agency
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contract
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must
be in writing or another
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form
with legal efficacy equivalent (telegraph, telex, fax, etc). The agreement should include
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some
aspects such as the agency's
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goods
or
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services
, remuneration,
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contract
duration, rights and obligations, compensation, etc.

Another
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part
, the
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commercial
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agents
has an
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important
role,
especially
in trade
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globalisation
.
Firstly
,
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commercial
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agents
bring productivity for traders in
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organising
, distributing and consuming
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goods
and
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services
domestic and abroad.
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Principals
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usually are
manufacturers, can have more opportunities to focus on producing high efficient
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products
. The
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agent
will bring them to customers
Consider replacing "in a professional manner" with the adverb for "professional"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a professional manner
.
Secondly
, the convenient distribution by
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commercial
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agents
raises the development of the
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economy
.
In particular
, it is
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recognised
as a profitable
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business
method for consumers with easy access to
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products
and insurance about
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product
quality and cost.

The fourth
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part
mentions comparing the
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regulations
of
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commercial
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agents
between Vietnam
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regulation
and United Kingdom
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regulation
.
Firstly
, the parties are
still
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principals
and
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agents
, in which the
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agent
plays an
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intermediary
role in
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commercial
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activities
. The
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agent
is on behalf of the
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principals
to trade
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products
or
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services
.
Moreover
, both Vietnam and the UK is eliminating
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some
individuals and
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organisations
that are not
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authorised
to be
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agents
. The rights and obligations of the parties
are regulated
by
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law
.
However
, the
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regulations
of the UK
are mentioned
more specific than in Vietnam.
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Because
they are not
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only
included in a
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provision
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but
also
appear in most relevant provisions. Other
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parts
such as remuneration, time limit, termination, etc
also
mention by both countries
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but
they
are legislated
in more detail in the UK
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regulation
.
In addition
, the
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commercial
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agents
in Vietnam
are regulated
in
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Commercial
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Law
and
also
in
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many
relevant legal documents. Do it
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is
not as specific as the UK
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regulation
which is The
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Commercial
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Agents
(Council Directive)
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Regulation
1993.
Finally
, Vietnam
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law
has the
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forms
of
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commercial
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agents
,
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but
it does not appear in the UK's
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law
and
conversely
, The UK
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regulation
includes
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some
provisions which Vietnam
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regulation
does not such as apportionment of commission between new and previous
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commercial
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
agents
, etc.

In summary,
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commercial
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agents
are necessary for the advancement of the
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economy
,
especially
in the period of world integration.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
So
that knowledge about the
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commercial
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agents
is meaningful for
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many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
activities
.
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IELTS essay The commercial agents in Vietnam legislation

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