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how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage.

how they challenge the specific theories presented in the reading passage. 26dVo

The author of the reading believes that there are some theories about existing the odd sounds and provides three reasons of support. However, the lecturer rejects the claim made in the reading, casting doubt on all the three reasons presented in the passage. First, the author of the reading claims that these sounds produced by male and female orca whales during their courtship ritual. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She says that these animals live near the surface of the ocean, but the sounds were hired from the deep parts of the ocean. Moreover, she states that the sonar system could detect whale sounds. Second, the author states that giant squid produced the sounds. The lecturer rebuts this. She puts forth the idea that these sounds were detected and reported for two decades, but the sounds stopped after that. Also, squids were lived from that time until now. Hence, if the sound were related to them, today the sounds would not stop. Finally, the author mentions that the sounds were due to some advanced military technology. The lecturer, on the other hand, says that submarines move so quickly. She elaborates on this by mentioning that even nowadays there is no advanced technology able to do this work.

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author
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some
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lecturer
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author
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lecturer
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but
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sounds
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, she states that the sonar system could detect whale sounds.

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author
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sounds
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lecturer
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sounds
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 and reported for two decades, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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sounds
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stopped
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lived
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were related
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sounds
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Finally
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author
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sounds
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some
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lecturer
, on the other hand
, says that submarines This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
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so
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. She elaborates on this by mentioning that even nowadays there is no advanced technology able to do this work. 