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the college years are a best time in a persons life

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The adolescent phase in an individuals life is considered to be stepping stones for them. In high school every student imagines the benefits of living independently, the joy of having friends and partying, the excitement of making their own decisions and the wanted responsibility of taking care of themselves without depending on their parents. College is a platform that has been viewed by most as a voice to become independent and responsible individuals. I strongly agree with the statement that college years are the best time in a persons life. I myself am in my final year of under-graduati. . .
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life
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to be stepping stones for them. In high school every student imagines the benefits of living
independently
, the joy of having friends and partying, the excitement of making their
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decisions and the wanted responsibility of taking care of themselves without depending on their parents. College is a platform that has
been viewed
by most as a voice to become independent and responsible individuals. I
strongly
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agree
with the statement that college years are the best time in a
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life.

I myself am in my final year of
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IELTS essay the college years are a best time in a persons life

Essay
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2 paragraphs
101 words
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4.0
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