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pets should be treated as one of the family members.

pets should be treated as one of the family members. E39QM

Every living being deserves to be loved and cared for, be it humans or animals. Since time immemorial it has been said that dogs are a man's best friend. Many people all around the globe have pets; dogs, cats, monkey, birds, turtles, fishes and many more. These pets dont only get cared for in return but love their master unconditionally. I personally love having a dog around in my house and have been a proud owner of a dog, couple of pigeons and 10 fishes, whom i have cared for and treated as one of my family members. Thus, i agree with the statement that pets should be treated like family mem. . .

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loved
 and cared for, be it humans or animals. “Since” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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 time immemorial it has been said
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dogs
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Many
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people
 all around the globe have pets; You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dogs
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many
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only
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get
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but
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love
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I personally
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love
 having a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpuppypup
dog
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house
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dog
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This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 with the statement that pets should be treated
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