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the college education brings many benefits to learners.

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It goes without saying that the college education brings many benefits to learners. Many people claim that college education help them have many opportunities. I agree with that opinion. Let's find out three of benefits it brings. To star with the relationship. Because a class in college willhave from 40 to 200 peoles who come from anywhere so we can make a lot of new friends in many cultures. Opportunity to learn and axchange cultures. between ethnic groups. Our softkills will also be enchance during college process. We can attend some groups that we interested. While we do the presentation, not only we can improve kills of teamwork but also we will improve public speaking. Last but not least, it is good future career. We will learn a lot from simple to specialized knowledge. It helps we improve qualifications and have better job opportunities. When you have a college degree, it will make it easier for you to get a job, have many career opportunities and feel confident. To sum up, we should study in college education. Because it brings us some benefits.
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future career. We will learn a lot from simple to specialized knowledge. It
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IELTS essay the college education brings many benefits to learners.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
183 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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