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tell about your hobbies in your live.

tell about your hobbies in your live. gWoGg

I guess that all the people in the word have one or many things to do on free time. So that I no exception. In my opinion, we should have a favorite hobbies in your live and relax them. When we fond of another things, your life feel so good. Absolutely, some one will said that they do not or don't know what their like and need. But they not yet realize them and one of the day you will know it. Do you know that your hobbies can change went you grow up? When you was younger, you used to play the doll, ferries wheel or remote control car. But when you become a adult, those hobbies are no more. In stead, we will prefer the bigger one as travel, shopping, etc. In the other hand, I recognise that

I guess that all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the word have one or This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 things to do on free time. “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
So that
 I no exception. In my opinion, we should have a favorite Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean "hobby"?hobby
hobbies
 in your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 and relax them. When It seems that a verb or adverb is missing or misspelled here. Please verify.
we fond
 of another things, your life feel This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. Absolutely
, Did you mean "someone"?someone
some one
 will The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: "say"say
said
 that they do not or don't know what their like and need. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 they not yet
 realize them and one of the day you will know it. Do you know that your hobbies can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 went you grow up? When you Use second person verb with 'you': "are" or "were".arewere
was
 younger, you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to play the doll, ferries wheel or remote control car. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 when you become Use "an" instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'an
a
 adult, those hobbies are no more. In stead, we will prefer the bigger one as travel, shopping, etc. In the other hand, I Possible spelling mistake. 'recognise' is British English.recognize
recognise
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphthat.that!that?that:that,that;
that