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tell about your hobbies in your live.

tell about your hobbies in your live. gWoGg
I guess that all the people in the word have one or many things to do on free time. So that I no exception. In my opinion, we should have a favorite hobbies in your live and relax them. When we fond of another things, your life feel so good. Absolutely, some one will said that they do not or don't know what their like and need. But they not yet realize them and one of the day you will know it. Do you know that your hobbies can change went you grow up? When you was younger, you used to play the doll, ferries wheel or remote control car. But when you become a adult, those hobbies are no more. In stead, we will prefer the bigger one as travel, shopping, etc. In the other hand, I recognise that
I guess that all the
people
in the word have one or
many
things to do on free time.
So that
I no exception. In my opinion, we should have a favorite
hobbies
in your
live
and relax them. When
we fond
of another things, your life feel
so
good
.
Absolutely
,
some one
will
said
that they do not or don't know what their like and need.
But
they not
yet
realize them and one of the day you will know it. Do you know that your hobbies can
change
went you grow up? When you
was
younger, you
used
to play the doll, ferries wheel or remote control car.
But
when you become
a
adult, those hobbies are no more. In stead, we will prefer the bigger one as travel, shopping, etc. In the other hand, I
recognise
that
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IELTS essay tell about your hobbies in your live.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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