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The children read a book that will be less imaginative development comparing to watching TV. Agree or Disagree?

The children read a book that will be less imaginative development comparing to watching TV. Agree or Disagree? X75NO
In recent years, reading is better for imagination or watching television has become a broad issue to the general public. Some people believe that watching TV helps children have more imagination. In my opinion, I partly disagree with idea. Discussed below are several reasons in favor of my perspectives. First and foremost, people should recognize that watching TV does not sure develop the imagination more than reading books. A very important point consider is that watching TV only passively acquires knowledge. This means that when watching TV, children acquire knowledge through images and sounds, while reading books, children can imagine images and emotional frames when described in books by the author. To illustrate this point, I would like to make is that the children read comic books, the content and images will help children imagine or wonder about the problem that occurs in the story while watching TV, children will easily get caught up in the sound images alive so they will remember more than imagining. Another point would like to make is that reading books contributes a lot to language skills. This is because of fact that reading will help children have a richer vocabulary to easily be engaged when communicating. For example, there are many books where the author uses Han-Viet words, or words that are rarely used when communicating, they always have comments below so that I can understand and imagine the meaning of that word. On the other hand, there are several arguments against the statement that watching TV helps children imagine more than reading books. In facts, people have this opinion because of the development of technology, they want to gather knowledge quickly to catch up with social knowledge instead of reading a book that is quite time consuming. This means that watching TV only increases the amount of knowledge, but not much helps to increase the imagination. In conclusion, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when people evaluate the impact of this issue, and it is still a controversial issue. As far as I am concerned, it could have both positive and negative impacts. People should have further consideration on this issue.
In recent years,
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to the
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general public
.
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Some
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people
believe that watching TV
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helps
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children
have more imagination. In my opinion, I partly disagree with
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idea
. Discussed below are several reasons in favor of my perspectives.

First
and foremost,
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people
should recognize that watching TV does not sure develop the imagination more than
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reading
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books
. A
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point consider is that watching TV
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only
passively
acquires
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knowledge
. This means that when watching TV,
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children
acquire
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knowledge
through
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images
and sounds, while
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reading
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books
,
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children
can imagine
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images
and emotional frames when
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described
in
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books
by the author. To illustrate this point, I would like to
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is that the
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children
read comic
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books
, the content and
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images
will
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help
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children
imagine or wonder about the problem that occurs in the story while watching TV,
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children
will
easily
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caught up in the sound
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alive
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they will remember more than imagining. Another point would like to
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is that
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reading
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contributes a lot to language
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. This is
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of fact that
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will
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children
have a richer vocabulary to
easily
be engaged
when communicating.
For example
, there are
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books
where the author
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words, or words that are rarely
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used
when communicating, they always have comments below
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that I can understand and imagine the meaning of that word.

On the other hand
, there are several arguments against the statement that watching TV
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helps
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children
imagine more than
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books
. In facts,
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people
have this opinion
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of the development of technology, they want to gather
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quickly
to catch up with social
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instead
of
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a
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that is
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time consuming
. This means that watching TV
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increases the amount of
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,
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not
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much
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helps
to increase the imagination.

In conclusion
, the above mentioned facts have created a dilemma when
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people
evaluate the impact of this
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, and it is
still
a controversial
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. As far as I
am concerned
, it could have both
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and
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impacts.
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IELTS essay The children read a book that will be less imaginative development comparing to watching TV. Agree or Disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
360 words
6.0
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