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The children are necessary to continue the generation and they are upcoming future for families.

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The children are necessary to continue the generation and they are upcoming future for families. Nowadays, the majority of the parents give a birth of child in their later in life. However this is not always the case. This is essay will be based on reasons for this trend and the effects on society. There are several reasons behind having children later in life. Firstly, men and women are living in the society where they have to compete with their co-workers and along with this, they are looking for coming more and mors. Especially a working man and woman e is busy with their tasks and this involviment leads them to treat having child as a secondary needs. An other reason getting marriage in aldkoffer 35-40 years of age. If a person will have this life poofner in such later in his, then it is obivious that there woulld be delay in having children. can be. In terms of family and cociety, there will be few impacts for familly, if the parents tore older then it is very hard to concentrate on child as they might be several health problems will be anse, Therefore, a child will not have a proper to lack of primary and cooid education, since parents are not able to hundred percentar on child, the children will not able to to socialice and would be contouched with social and moral values. I think that is not good for any societly. In concluelong Lele carefin search of employment as well as salary, and delay in marriage bombe one sharing in their lote life. For resut, they are not able to grow up their child with all requires skill at home. Hence, society has to suffer with unskilled youth who are having overy less ethics.
The
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are necessary to continue the
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generation and
they are upcoming future for families. Nowadays, the majority of the parents give a birth of
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child
in their later in
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life
.
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However
this is not always the case. This is essay will
be based
on reasons for this trend and the effects on society.

There are several reasons behind
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having
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children
later in
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life
.
Firstly
,
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men
and women are living in the society where they
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have to
compete with their co-workers and along with this, they are looking for coming more and
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mors
.
Especially
a working
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man
and woman e is busy with their tasks and this
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involviment
leads them to treat
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having
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child
as a secondary needs.
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An other
reason getting marriage in
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aldkoffer
35-40 years of age. If a person
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will have
this
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life
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poofner
in such later in his, then it is
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obivious
that there
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woulld
be delay in
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having
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children
.
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can
be.

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cociety
, there will be few impacts for
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familly
, if the parents tore
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it is
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very
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hard
to concentrate on
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child
as they might be several health problems will be
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anse
,
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, a
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child
will not have a proper to lack of primary and
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cooid
education,

since parents are not able to
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percentar
on
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, the
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will not able
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socialice
and would be
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contouched
with social and moral values. I
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that is
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good
for any
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societly
.

In
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concluelong
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Lele
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carefin
search of employment
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lote
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. For
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resut
, they are not able to grow up their
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with all requires

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skill
at home.
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, society
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suffer with unskilled youth who are
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overy
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IELTS essay The children are necessary to continue the generation and they are upcoming future for families.

Essay
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5 paragraphs
297 words
5.5
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