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The chart illustrates the main exports in Southland separately in 2010, 2021 and 2025.

The chart illustrates the main exports in Southland separately in 2010, 2021 and 2025. AaXgn
The chart illustrates the main exports in Southland separately in 2010, 2021 and 2025 at the same time, including International tourism, Dairy products and Meat products as well. The statistics gives us information about changes that the number of International tourism expense increased smoothly from 2010 to 2021 and calculated that it will up to 10 billion in 2025, apart from a little bit over 8 million in 2010. Meanwhile, it can be seen obviously that the changing phenonema related to the other two parts are quite different in that Meat products dropped between 2010 to 2021 and forecasts that it has the possibility to keep decreasing and fall to around 5 billion later in 2025. Judging from the chart, we can know it clearly that both the International tourism's and Meat products' exports in 2010 were the top one and the lowest one as it will be in 2025, which was forecasted, being the same position of three main exports in Southland.
The chart illustrates the main exports in Southland
separately
in 2010, 2021 and 2025 at the same time, including International tourism, Dairy products and Meat products
as well
. The statistics gives us information about
changes
that the number of International tourism expense increased
smoothly
from 2010 to 2021 and calculated that it will up to 10 billion in 2025, apart from a
little bit
over 8 million in 2010. Meanwhile, it can be
seen
obviously
that the changing
phenonema
related to the other two parts are quite
different
in that Meat products dropped
between 2010 to 2021
and forecasts that it has the possibility to
keep
decreasing and fall to around 5 billion later in 2025. Judging from the chart, we can know it
clearly
that both the International tourism's and Meat products' exports in 2010 were the top one and the lowest one as it will be in 2025, which
was forecasted
, being the same position of three main exports in Southland.
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IELTS essay The chart illustrates the main exports in Southland separately in 2010, 2021 and 2025.

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