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The characteristic features of the motions of Uva Sabaragamuwa tradition in Sri Lanka.

Dancing has been originated by the human motions which was mixed with rhythmic movements. Later due to the changes of cultural aspects the body language also was changed. According to these changes the tradition of Sri Lankan tradition of dancing was divided into three main streams as a Udarata, Pahatharata and Sabaragamuwa. Each dancing tradition has its oven characteristic features. The objective of this research is to find out the characteristic features of Uva, Sabaragamuwa dancing tradition. The speed of motions rhythm of traditional the post of motions has been studied for this research work. The formation full body stationary movements, troweling movements and stationary troweling movements are also described in this research. The major objective of this research is to find out whether there is normal acceleration more than other dancing traditions based on the physical adjustment.
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of cultural aspects the body language
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. According to these
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tradition
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Sabaragamuwa
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dancing
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has its oven characteristic features. The objective of this
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is to find out the characteristic features of
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Uva
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Sabaragamuwa
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dancing
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. The speed of motions rhythm of traditional the post of motions has
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, troweling
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and stationary troweling
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is to find out whether there is normal acceleration more than other
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dancing
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traditions
based on the physical adjustment.
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IELTS essay The characteristic features of the motions of Uva Sabaragamuwa tradition in Sri Lanka.

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