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The Brick Manufacturing Process

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The process depicts how to used the brick manfacting to build we can see from the number of step the brick manfacting is quite slenght and complex in the report, I will decribe the all step for using the manfarting build. According to what is showen, to begin with use the bolldozer to dipper and clay. After that we put to melal gride in the rafter Next stop mix the sand with water after wes put in wire culter to cut the bricks. If we donkwater and sand It mould only it will be big bricks. Then we putted in the oven for 24 hours of 48 hours. Next it will to in three steps on the oven. The first steps it kiln and moderate the temperatued between 2000 and 98 °c The high temperature it & For Booc. The last step in oven copling chamber and it take from towadays or threedglafter packaging The final step deliver to building place. To sum up, we could say that the brick manfacting # it good quality they of ill there to use for build.
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to build we can
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build.

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bolldozer
to dipper and clay. After that we put to
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melal
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gride
in the rafter
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mix the sand with water after
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put in wire
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culter
to
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cut
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. If we
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donkwater
and sand It
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mould
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big
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bricks
. Then we putted in the oven for 24 hours of 48 hours.
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steps
on the oven. The
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it kiln and moderate the
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temperatued
between 2000 and 98
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°c
The high temperature it & For
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Booc
. The last
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in oven
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copling
chamber and it
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from
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towadays
or
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threedglafter
packaging The final
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deliver to building place.

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manfacting
#
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it
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use
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IELTS essay The Brick Manufacturing Process

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
183 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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