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The biggest concern in today’s world is pollution and environmental waste.

The biggest concern in today’s world is pollution and environmental waste. As countries are progressing and become wealthier environmental problem are growing day by day which cannot be neglected. I totally agree with statement. First of all, in developing countries pollution is the main problem for the atmosphere. To become richer state, country depend on their industries which eventually create the industrial waste. Moreover, poor infrastructure also cause not only ecological but also effect the healthy environment. For instance, a research is conducted by university of Mumbai, 60% of total environmental issues is created by industries which include pollution and other toxic waste. Secondly, the effect of pollution and environmental issue on human health is so dangerous that it cannot be avoided. The smog atmosphere generated the toxics in air which increase the diseases of lung and throat. Moreover, it not only effect humans but other species on this planet. In last few years, we have seen that large number of dead fishes are coming on shore of oceans around the world. This situations become the eye opener for decision maker of developing countries. For example, in mid 90s London face the smoky and fog weather which effects the health of senior citizen and children. Eventually, this weather cost many lives which makes the policy maker and other streak holder to think about this and takes major steps to dispose the industrial wastage as well the air pollution. To conclude this, we can only overcome the pollution and environmental is to create the eco-friendly environment.
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waste. As
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countries
are progressing and become wealthier
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problem are growing day by day which cannot
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with statement.

First
of all, in developing
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countries
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pollution
is the main problem for the atmosphere. To become richer state,
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country
depend on their industries which
eventually
create the industrial waste.
Moreover
, poor infrastructure
also
cause not
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only
ecological
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also
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effect
the healthy environment.
For instance
, a research
is conducted
by university of Mumbai, 60% of total
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environmental
issues
is created
by industries which include
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pollution
and other toxic waste.

Secondly
, the
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effect
of
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pollution
and
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environmental
issue on human health is
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so
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dangerous
that it cannot
be avoided
. The smog atmosphere generated the toxics in air which increase the diseases of lung and throat.
Moreover
, it not
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only
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effect
humans
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other species on this planet. In last few years, we have
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seen
that large number of dead fishes are coming on shore of oceans around the world. This situations become the eye opener for decision maker of developing
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countries
.
For example
, in mid 90s London face the smoky and fog weather which effects the health of senior citizen and children.
Eventually
, this weather cost
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many
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lives
which
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makes
the policy maker and other streak holder to
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think
about this and takes major steps to dispose the industrial wastage
as well
the air pollution.

To conclude
this, we can
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only
overcome the
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pollution
and
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environmental
is to create the eco-friendly environment.
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IELTS essay The biggest concern in today’s world is pollution and environmental waste.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
255 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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