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the best way to solve the world's environment problem is o increase the price of fuel. To what extend do you agree or agree with this statement.

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In this contemporary era, whole global is facing environmental problem due to which they are suffering from assorted issues. Some masses believe that the best way of solving this problem is to surge the price of fuel. However, I agree with this notion to great extent and the reasons for my stance would be substantiated in the impending textual. To commence with, every country is suffering from several pollutions in the environment. Due to this, people are facing health issues. So, the best way is to increase the price of fuel. Ultimately, the usage of the fuel will be decreased, and people will prefer to walk for short distances or use bicycles. Furthermore, the vehicles also emits some harmful gases like carbon dioxide as these such kind of gases may leads to various diseases such as asthma. As a result, the environment and human's life can be in danger in the future. for instance, in India, the government have already increase the the rate of fuels like petrol and desal because of the increment of pollution. Consequently, masses will automatically preserve the environment by using more and more CNG vehicles or eco-friendly vehicles. On the other hand, the pollution is not a single menace to solve the environment issues. So, there are other enormous problems to be considered. Initially, the deforestation in also one of the root cause in the environment because most of the number of people make houses in the form of wooden. As a consequence, the cutting of trees leads to alleviate the oxygen level. To recapitulate, despite having assorted menaces regarding pollution, people are still using more and more vehicles due to which the pollution in the environment bergeoning steadily. So, the best solution is to increase the price of fuels to save this eco-system for future generations.
In this contemporary era, whole global is facing environmental problem due to which they are suffering from assorted issues.
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Some
masses believe that the best way of solving this problem is to surge the price of
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fuel
.
However
, I
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agree
with this notion to great extent and the reasons for my stance would
be substantiated
in the impending textual. To commence with, every country is suffering from several
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pollutions
in the
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environment
. Due to this,
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people
are facing health issues.
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So
, the best way is to increase the price of
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fuel
.
Ultimately
, the usage of the
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fuel
will
be decreased
, and
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people
will prefer to walk for short distances or
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use
bicycles.
Furthermore
, the vehicles
also
emits
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some
harmful gases like carbon dioxide as these such kind of gases may leads to various diseases such as asthma.
As a result
, the
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environment
and human's life can be in
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danger
in the future.
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for
instance, in India, the
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government
have already
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increase
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the the
rate of
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fuels
like petrol and
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desal
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because
of the increment of
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pollution
.
Consequently
, masses will
automatically
preserve the
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environment
by using more and more CNG vehicles or eco-friendly vehicles.

On the other hand
, the
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pollution
is not a single menace to solve the
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environment
issues.
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So
, there are other enormous problems to
be considered
.
Initially
, the deforestation in
also
one of the root cause in the
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environment
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because
most of the number of
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people
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make
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houses
in the form of wooden. As a consequence, the cutting of trees leads to alleviate the oxygen level.

To recapitulate, despite having assorted menaces regarding
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pollution
,
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people
are
still
using more and more vehicles due to which the
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pollution
in the
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environment
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bergeoning
steadily
.
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So
, the best solution is to increase the price of
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fuels
to save this
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eco-system
for future generations.
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IELTS essay the best way to solve the world's environment problem is o increase the price of fuel.

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
302 words
5.5
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