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THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE YOUTH CRIMES IS TO EDUCATE THEIR PARENTS WITH PARENTAL SKILLS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE YOUTH CRIMES IS TO EDUCATE THEIR PARENTS WITH PARENTAL SKILLS. g5qwO
In the present era, the number of criminal activities by young people significantly increasing day by day. Some people believe that, an ideal way to tackle this issue is, to educate parents about good parenting skill. In my point of view, I strongly agree with this argument. In this essay we will scrutinize the above mentioned argument and also analyse the importance of good parenting in child behaviour development.
In the present era, the number of criminal activities by young
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people
significantly
increasing day by day.
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Some
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people
believe that, an ideal way to tackle this issue is, to educate parents about
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good
parenting
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skill
. In my point of view, I
strongly
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agree
with this argument. In this essay we will scrutinize the above mentioned argument and
also
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analyse
the importance of
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good
parenting in child
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behaviour
development.
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IELTS essay THE BEST WAY TO REDUCE YOUTH CRIMES IS TO EDUCATE THEIR PARENTS WITH PARENTAL SKILLS.

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