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Why do I celebrate my birthday and how I celebrate my birth day

Why do I celebrate my birthday and how I celebrate my birth day YLkQd

I bone on 2007 February 13th. I celebrate my birth day because I come to this world on that day. My father and my mother were very happy. And my grandmother also. Now I am 12 years old. at this year I celebrated my birth day with my family members and my friends. That day we played lot. My mother made lots of sweets, rolls, cutlets, drinks and many other things. We went to cake shop and we bought a beautiful chocolate icing cake before the party. Parents organized the party at the home. I had many gifts from them. I was surprised look them. Special gift from my loving nanga. we enjoyed that party time. Thanks for these my family members.

I bone on 2007 February 13th. I celebrate my birth day This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to this world on that day. My father and my mother were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy. And my grandmother also
.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 I am 12 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAt
at
 this year I celebrated my birth day with my family members and my friends. That day we played lot. My mother made lots of sweets, rolls, cutlets, drinks and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 other things. We went to cake Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).shop, and
shop and
 we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 chocolate icing cake This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 the party. Parents organized the party at the home. I had This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 gifts from them. I was surprised
 look them. Special gift from my loving Possible spelling mistake found.manganāga
nanga
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 enjoyed that party time. Thanks for A determiner cannot combine with a possessive pronoun. Did you mean simply "my family" or "these family"?my familythese family
these my family
 members. 